Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and complete. Avoid starting with just the keyword 'Library.' Instead, begin with a full sentence directly answering the question. Also, try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I don't go to the library very often because I prefer buying books and reading them at home where I feel more comfortable.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct verb forms and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your preferences clearly and avoid contradictory statements.

例: Usually, I select books to borrow and bring them home, but sometimes I enjoy reading at the library because it is quiet and peaceful.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details to enrich the response.

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I used to dislike reading; however, now I really enjoy it and visit libraries more often.

提案: Your answer contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Avoid using confusing words like 'alternate kids.' Use clear and precise language, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

例: I don't think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they usually prefer studying or reading at home where they feel more comfortable.

× I usually just selecting their books and bringing them home, but sometimes I read.

✓ I usually just select their books and bring them home, but sometimes I read.

The verb 'selecting' and 'bringing' are incorrectly used after 'usually just'. The correct form is the base verb 'select' and 'bring' to match the simple present tense for habitual actions.

× I usually just selecting their books and bringing them home, but sometimes I read.

✓ I usually just select books and bring them home, but sometimes I read.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used here because it is unclear who 'their' refers to. It is better to use 'books' without a possessive pronoun to avoid confusion.

× I don't think that alternate kids are often going to the library to focus on their studying or reading because many Chinese kids prefer studying or reading at home.

✓ I don't think that many kids often go to the library to focus on their studying or reading because many Chinese kids prefer studying or reading at home.

The word 'alternate' is incorrectly used here. The correct quantifier is 'many' to indicate a large number of kids.

× I don't think that alternate kids are often going to the library to focus on their studying or reading because many Chinese kids prefer studying or reading at home.

✓ I don't think that many kids often go to the library to focus on their studying or reading because many Chinese kids prefer studying or reading at home.

The verb phrase 'are often going' is less appropriate here. The simple present tense 'go' is better to express habitual actions.