Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to provide a complete sentence with reasons or examples to make your response more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and it is a quiet place to study.

提案: Avoid asking the examiner a question in your answer. Also, expand your response by adding reasons or examples and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I usually read fantasy books in the library because they help me relax and escape from reality.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by adding more specific details and linking words to enrich the response.

例: Of course, I always used to go to the library when I was a kid because I loved reading storybooks, and I still enjoy visiting it now.

提案: Try to answer the question directly even if you are unsure. You can give a general opinion or say what you have heard, and avoid mentioning lack of knowledge.

例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because reading is encouraged in schools and at home.

× I usually read fantasy books, what about you?

✓ I usually read fantasy books. What about you?

The original sentence incorrectly uses a comma to join two independent clauses, which is a comma splice. To correct this, the clauses should be separated by a period or a semicolon. Here, using a period is appropriate to clearly separate the two ideas.