Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it has many books that help me learn new things. I especially visit more frequently before exams to prepare better.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'the my exams'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: In the library, I usually read English books and practice sample tests. This helps me review and improve my skills before school exams.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp như 'I've got the Hebei'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I have been going to the library since I was a child. When I was five, I often read princess stories there, which made me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

例: Yes, many Chinese children visit libraries regularly. They are hardworking and often achieve high academic rankings worldwide.

× I always find some sample and books, especially books about English before the my exams at the school.

✓ I always find some samples and books, especially books about English before my exams at school.

The word 'sample' should be plural 'samples' to match the plural noun 'books'. Also, 'the my exams' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed before 'my exams'. Additionally, 'at the school' is better as 'at school' in this context.

× Before the exam, I always go to the library more.

✓ Before exams, I always go to the library more.

The phrase 'Before the exam' is too specific and singular; 'Before exams' is more general and appropriate. Also, 'more' at the end is vague; it implies frequency but is better clarified by context or rephrasing.

× I've got the Hebei which is going to the library since I was a child.

✓ I've had the habit of going to the library since I was a child.

The phrase 'I've got the Hebei' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'I've had the habit'. Also, 'which is going to the library' is incorrect; it should be 'of going to the library'.

× For instance, when I when I was five years old, I frequently go to the library to find some stories about princesses and enjoy it.

✓ For instance, when I was five years old, I frequently went to the library to find some stories about princesses and enjoy them.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'enjoy it' should be 'enjoy them' because 'stories' is plural.

× They're they're all really intelligent and how how one of the best performances in the academic ranking over the world.

✓ They're all really intelligent and have some of the best performances in academic rankings around the world.

The repetition 'They're they're' and 'how how' are errors. Also, 'one of the best performances' should be 'some of the best performances' to agree with plural 'they'. 'Academic ranking over the world' should be 'academic rankings around the world' for correct preposition and plural form.