Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use the correct tense and more natural phrasing. Instead of 'I won't go often,' say 'I don't often go to the library.' Also, provide a brief reason to enrich your answer.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read books online.

提案: Avoid sentence fragments and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually read books and do some work there.'

例: I usually read books and do some work in the library because it's quiet and comfortable.

提案: Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Instead of 'they were a lot of,' say 'there were many.' Also, try to add more specific details.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because there were many interesting books about animals and science.

提案: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Express your opinion clearly and support it with a reason or example.

例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools encourage reading.

× No, I won't go often to the library.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'won't' (will not), which expresses future refusal or intention, but the question asks about habitual action. The correct modal verb for habitual actions is 'do' in the present tense. Therefore, 'I don't often go' is appropriate.

× I usually read books and. Do some work in the library.

✓ I usually read books and do some work in the library.

The original sentence is fragmented due to an unnecessary period after 'and'. The two actions should be connected in one sentence without a period to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because they were a lot of interesting books in the library.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because there were a lot of interesting books in the library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they' instead of 'there' to indicate existence. 'There' is used with 'were' to express that many books existed in the library.