Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một câu giải thích cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

例: I don't often go to the library because nowadays most books are available online. This makes it convenient for me to read anywhere without needing to visit the library.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng thì hiện tại để phù hợp với câu hỏi. Câu trả lời hiện tại hơi phức tạp và không rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Usually, I look for interesting books on the shelves and then find a quiet corner to read them comfortably.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý.

例: Definitely yes. When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my friends to do homework and study together, which was always a fun and memorable experience.

提案: Bạn nên tránh nói "I don't know" trong bài thi và cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi một cách tự tin hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm lý do cụ thể.

例: Although I am not Chinese, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because it provides a quiet and good environment for studying.

× I don't really often go to the library because in this today digitalized world, everything like book is on the Internet so that I can read them at home or any place I want.

✓ I don't often really go to the library because in today's digitalized world, everything like books is on the Internet so that I can read them at home or any place I want.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before 'really' to maintain natural English word order. Also, 'in this today digitalized world' is awkward; it should be 'in today's digitalized world' to correctly express possession and time. Additionally, 'everything like book' is incorrect; it should be 'everything like books' to match plural form with 'everything' referring to multiple items.

× I don't really often go to the library because in this today digitalized world, everything like book is on the Internet so that I can read them at home or any place I want.

✓ I don't often really go to the library because in today's digitalized world, everything like books is on the Internet so that I can read them at home or any place I want.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'everything like books' refers to multiple items. Using singular 'book' here is incorrect.

× If I had to go to the library, I would find an interesting book on the shelves than a quiet corner where I can read it.

✓ If I had to go to the library, I would find an interesting book on the shelves and then a quiet corner where I can read it.

The conjunction 'than' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'and then' to indicate sequence of actions rather than comparison.

× To be honest, I am not a Chinese myself so I don't know that much about Chinese kid, but I think that they do also go to the library because it's a perfect place for study and environment.

✓ To be honest, I am not Chinese myself so I don't know that much about Chinese kids, but I think that they also do go to the library because it's a perfect place for study and environment.

The word 'kid' should be plural 'kids' because it refers to multiple children. Also, 'a Chinese' is better as 'Chinese' without article when referring to nationality.