Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但语法时态不一致（"went" 应为 "go"），且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议使用现在时态，简洁表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can study without distractions. Moreover, I can borrow books, which is both economical and convenient.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不够自然，"via library" 用词不当。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达，并用连接词连接观点。

例: Usually, I study in the library because it is quiet and free from distractions. In addition, I like to borrow a variety of books there since it saves money.

提案: 回答不够清晰，"went suddenly" 和 "be a cockroach" 表达不自然且含义模糊。建议用更准确的表达说明过去的习惯，并避免使用不恰当的比喻。

例: To be honest, I rarely went to the library before high school because I preferred staying at home playing video games and watching TV.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如 "for maybe borrow the books"。建议使用正确的语法，简洁表达，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library to borrow books and study because it is a quiet place where they can focus without distractions.

× Yes, I went to library frequently because I think the library is a quiet place for me to study without distractions and on top of that we can borrow a couple of books which is pretty economical and convenient.

✓ Yes, I went to the library frequently because I think the library is a quiet place for me to study without distractions and on top of that we can borrow a couple of books which is pretty economical and convenient.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I go to the library for studying frequently because the library is a quiet place for me to study without distraction.

✓ I go to the library to study frequently because the library is a quiet place for me to study without distraction.

The phrase 'go to the library for studying' is incorrect; after 'go to' we use the base form 'to study' instead of the gerund 'studying'. This is a common English structure for expressing purpose.

× On top of that, I would prefer to borrow diverse books via library because it's very cost effective.

✓ On top of that, I would prefer to borrow diverse books from the library because it's very cost effective.

The preposition 'via' is incorrect here; when borrowing books from a place, the correct preposition is 'from'. Also, 'the library' requires the definite article.

× Frankly, I went to the library suddenly before I entered a Senior High School because I was quite lazy.

✓ Frankly, I started going to the library only shortly before I entered Senior High School because I was quite lazy.

The adverb 'suddenly' is not appropriate to describe starting a habit; 'only shortly before' or 'just before' is better. Also, 'a Senior High School' is incorrect; 'Senior High School' is a proper noun and does not need an article here.

× For example, I would prefer to be a cockroach at home to play video games and watching TV.

✓ For example, I would prefer to be a cockroach at home playing video games and watching TV.

The phrase 'to play video games and watching TV' mixes infinitive and gerund forms incorrectly. Using 'playing' and 'watching' together after 'at home' is correct. Also, 'prefer to be a cockroach' is a figurative expression and acceptable here.

× Yes, absolutely. The Chinese students go to the library frequently for maybe borrow the books and study there because they are quiet, you know they can study there without distractions.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Chinese students go to the library frequently to borrow books and study there because it is quiet; you know, they can study there without distractions.

'The Chinese students' is too specific; 'Chinese students' is more general. 'For maybe borrow the books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to borrow books'. Also, 'they are quiet' should be 'it is quiet' referring to the library. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.