Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "wealth facilities" và câu bị lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích cụ thể về tình trạng thư viện ở thành phố bạn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because my small city doesn't have a large library with sufficient facilities. Therefore, it lacks enough resources for students like me.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin từ câu trả lời trước. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về loại sách bạn thích mượn.

例: I usually borrow books that interest me, such as novels or romantic stories, whenever I visit the library, although I don't often study there.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "prefer buying books" thay vì "prefer to buying books". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và các câu bổ sung có liên kết logic.

例: No, I didn't often go to the library as a child because I preferred buying books. My parents often took me to bookstores, and I enjoyed choosing and keeping my own collection, which made reading more enjoyable.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ "I'm even do not eat Chinese" là sai. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh nói lặp và dùng từ chính xác. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

例: Honestly, I don't know much about this, but I believe that many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very studious nowadays.

× Like because in my small city there isn't a large library with enough wealth facilities so is even don't have enough resources for students like me.

✓ Like because in my small city there isn't a large library with enough wealth facilities, so it doesn't even have enough resources for students like me.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'doesn't even have'. 'Is' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'it doesn't'. This is a 'There be issue' because the existence and description of the library are being discussed, and the verb form must agree with the subject.

× I always prefer to buying books.

✓ I always prefer buying books.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. Using 'to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer buying'. This is a 'Verb + -ing form' issue.

× I really enjoy choosing book and keep it by my own.

✓ I really enjoy choosing books and keeping them on my own.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'keep it' should be 'keeping them' to match the plural noun. This is a 'Singular and plural issue'.

× And I think that having my own collection make reading more.

✓ And I think that having my own collection makes reading more enjoyable.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'having my own collection'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'enjoyable' clarifies the meaning. This is a 'Verb + -ing form' and 'Subject-verb agreement' issue.

× I'm even do not eat Chinese.

✓ I don't even speak Chinese.

'I'm even do not eat Chinese' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I don't even speak Chinese'. 'Eat' is incorrect here, and the auxiliary verb 'do' should be used properly. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and verb usage issue.