Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
In fact, I didn't used to go to the library for many years because I personally don't enjoy the process of reading. I find it very annoying and I just don't like sitting in one place for much time. But recently I changed this thing and I started to go there once a week.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Surprisingly, I rarely read books there because, as I said, I'm not a huge fan of this kind of activity, but I go there to do some of my homework. For example, I prefer to write my essays there because I have plenty of information around myself and I can find whatever I need.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because my grandfather had a hobby of reading diverse books and he used to go to the library every week to get around 5 books and read them and they take them back.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
No, Chinese kids don't often go to the local libraries, because in my neighborhood there aren't many families of this nationality. You can see people from Bulgaria, they are the most and also some people from the other Balkan countries.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 75.0提案: Опитайте се да използвате по-естествени изрази и да избягвате граматични грешки, като например "I didn't used to" трябва да бъде "I didn't use to". Също така, опитайте се да направите отговора по-кратък и по-ясен, като избягвате излишни повторения и използвате свързващи думи за по-добър поток.
例: I didn't use to go to the library because I didn't enjoy reading and sitting still for long. However, recently I started going once a week to study and change my routine.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 80.0提案: Опитайте да използвате по-разнообразен речник и да свържете изреченията по-логично с помощта на свързващи думи като "because" или "so". Също така, избягвайте повторения като "I go there" и "there" многократно, като използвате синоними или пренареждате изреченията.
例: I usually do my homework in the library because it has many resources. For instance, I prefer writing essays there since I can easily find the information I need.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 70.0提案: Опитайте да направите изреченията по-кратки и по-ясни, като избягвате излишни повторения и граматични грешки. Например, "they take them back" е неправилно и трябва да бъде "he returned them". Използвайте свързващи думи за по-добър поток на речта.
例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because my grandfather loved reading. He visited the library every week to borrow about five books, which he always returned on time.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Опитайте да отговорите по-точно на въпроса и да избягвате отклонения от темата. Също така, използвайте по-ясни и свързани изречения, като добавите свързващи думи. Например, обяснете защо китайските деца не посещават библиотеките, а не само за етническия състав на квартала.
例: No, Chinese kids don't often go to local libraries, mainly because there are few Chinese families in my neighborhood. Most residents are from Bulgaria and other Balkan countries, so the library usage reflects that.
文法
× I didn't used to go to the library for many years because I personally don't enjoy the process of reading.
✓ I didn't use to go to the library for many years because I personally don't enjoy the process of reading.
The phrase 'didn't use to' is the correct form for expressing past habits in negative sentences. 'Used to' is used in affirmative sentences, but when negated with 'didn't', the base form 'use' should be used instead of 'used'.
× But recently I changed this thing and I started to go there once a week.
✓ But recently I changed this and I started to go there once a week.
The phrase 'changed this thing' is awkward and unnecessary. 'Changed this' is more natural and concise. The past tense 'changed' and 'started' are correctly used here.
× he used to go to the library every week to get around 5 books and read them and they take them back.
✓ he used to go to the library every week to get around 5 books, read them, and take them back.
The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to 'he'. It should be 'he' to maintain subject consistency. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary conjunctions and commas.
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