Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达时间和频率。

例: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week to do my homework. When exams are near, I visit the library more often to prepare and find study materials.

提案: 回答结构混乱，句子不完整，缺少连贯的逻辑，建议先明确主题句，再用连词补充细节，注意语法和词汇准确性。

例: I study industrial design, so I usually bring my computer to the library to complete graphic design projects. Sometimes, I also submit sketches to my professor there because the quiet environment helps me focus.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达过去的习惯和感受，注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I have fond memories of going to the library as a child. My parents encouraged me to read instead of playing computer games, so I often borrowed comic books and picture books. My favorite comic was about a scientist.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，建议先明确观点，再用具体原因支持，避免模糊表达。

例: Yes, Chinese students often go to the library because they need to prepare for important exams like the college entrance exam. Compared to American students, Chinese students spend more time studying in libraries.

× Because I was a college student, now in the normal day, I go to the library on a weekly basis to prepare the homework.

✓ Because I am a college student, now on normal days, I go to the library on a weekly basis to prepare the homework.

句子中使用了过去时态“was”，但描述的是现在的情况，应使用现在时态“am”。

× But when nearly the text, I will go to library frequently to take more preparing and search for.

✓ But when the exam is near, I will go to the library frequently to prepare more and search for materials.

缺少冠词“the”在“library”前，且“nearly the text”表达不正确，应改为“the exam is near”。

× I start I study the department of industrial design, so I often bring the computer to finish the graphic design job in the library, and sometimes I drop the sketch for a professor.

✓ I study in the Department of Industrial Design, so I often bring my computer to finish graphic design work in the library, and sometimes I submit sketches to a professor.

“start I study”结构错误，应去掉“start”；“bring the computer”应为“bring my computer”；“drop the sketch for a professor”表达不准确，应为“submit sketches to a professor”。

× The quiet environment and comfortable temperature in laboratory often.

✓ The quiet environment and comfortable temperature in the library are often helpful.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整，应补充谓语使句子完整。

× Yeah, that was the lovely memory because my parent me from playing computer games in the past, I often go to library to search for comic book and picture book to spend routing time.

✓ Yeah, that was a lovely memory because my parents stopped me from playing computer games in the past. I often went to the library to search for comic books and picture books to spend my free time.

“my parent me”表达错误，应为“my parents stopped me”；“go to library”缺少冠词，应为“go to the library”；“routing time”应为“free time”。

× I my favorite comic book is a scientist.

✓ My favorite comic book is about a scientist.

句子中“a scientist”前缺少介词“about”，且“comic book”是单数，表达应完整。

× Exactly very often because you need to prepare many important exam when you into the Senior High School or College in Chinese.

✓ Exactly, very often because you need to prepare for many important exams when you enter Senior High School or College in China.

“many important exam”中“exam”应为复数“exams”；“prepare many important exam”应为“prepare for many important exams”；“when you into”应为“when you enter”；“in Chinese”应为“in China”。

× In the education system, we go to library often compared to American student which can do their lovely.

✓ In the education system, we go to the library more often compared to American students who can enjoy their free time.

“go to library”缺少冠词，应为“go to the library”；“American student”应为复数“American students”；“which can do their lovely”表达不正确，应为“who can enjoy their free time”。