Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: I don't go to the library often because it is far from my house. However, I visit it when I have lectures at my university.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ.

例: I usually go to the library to borrow documents or headphones to help me study for my courses.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và giải thích rõ hơn về thói quen của bạn khi còn nhỏ.

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because my school had a library for all students.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because many of them enjoy reading comic books and novels.

× So I go to the library when I have when I have lecture in my university.

✓ So I go to the library when I have a lecture at my university.

The sentence has a repetition 'when I have when I have' which is incorrect. Also, 'lecture' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a'. The preposition 'at' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to university locations.

× So I go to the library when I have when I have lecture in my university.

✓ So I go to the library when I have a lecture at my university.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'university'; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location in this context.

× Maybe I got to I go to the library to reserve some document headphone headphone for me to finish this line about some subject in my pro programs.

✓ Maybe I go to the library to borrow some documents and headphones to help me finish assignments about some subjects in my programs.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrases like 'got to I go' and 'document headphone headphone'. 'Reserve' is not the correct verb here; 'borrow' is more appropriate. Also, 'in my pro programs' is unclear; 'in my programs' is better. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I usually go to the library when I got a skill because my school have one library to all of students.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the library when I had a skill because my school had one library for all students.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Usually' with past events should be 'usually went'. 'Got' should be 'had'. 'Have' should be 'had' to match past tense. 'To all of students' should be 'for all students'.

× Yes, I usually go to the library when I got a skill because my school have one library to all of students.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the library when I had a skill because my school had one library for all students.

The noun 'students' is plural, so the verb should be 'had' to agree with singular 'school'. Also, 'to all of students' is incorrect; 'for all students' is correct.

× I think yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library because I think many kids will interest come read comic book and other kinds of novels.

✓ I think yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library because I think many kids are interested in reading comic books and other kinds of novels.

The phrase 'will interest come read' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'are interested in reading'. Also, 'comic book' should be plural 'comic books' to match 'many kids'.