Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and keep your sentences concise and natural.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I find the peaceful atmosphere very relaxing. I enjoy borrowing books rather than buying them, as it allows me to read a variety of genres without spending much money.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences. Directly answer the question and provide specific details about your activities in the library. Avoid incomplete sentences.

例: In the library, I usually study hard to improve my knowledge. I also read carefully to understand the deeper meanings of the texts, which helps me learn better.

提案: Good answer with relevant details and examples. To improve, try to use more linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid minor grammatical errors.

例: When I was a kid, my school had a library that we visited once a week. I enjoyed going there because it taught me patience, and the peaceful atmosphere helped me feel calm and focused. Moreover, the librarian was very helpful and always guided us to find interesting books.

提案: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and unclear. Try to answer the question directly, even if you don't know the exact information, and give a reasonable opinion politely. Avoid unnecessary personal information and vague phrases.

例: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but I believe many children around the world visit libraries regularly to learn and read books, as libraries are important places for gaining knowledge.

× I enjoy borrowing books than buying them and umm.

✓ I enjoy borrowing books more than buying them.

The phrase 'enjoy borrowing books than buying them' is incorrect because 'more' is needed to compare two actions. The correct comparative structure is 'enjoy borrowing books more than buying them.' This clarifies the preference clearly.

× I just hit the books to study even more stronger and I also read between the lines and to know about the meaning in depth.

✓ I just hit the books to study even stronger and I also read between the lines to understand the meaning in depth.

The phrase 'even more stronger' is incorrect because 'stronger' is already a comparative adjective and does not need 'more.' Also, 'to know about the meaning in depth' is awkward; 'to understand the meaning in depth' is more appropriate. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I am very much.

✓ I am very passionate about it.

The sentence 'I am very much.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks an object or complement. Adding 'passionate about it' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× we visited to it once a week.

✓ we visited it once a week.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to.' Saying 'visited to it' is incorrect. The correct form is 'visited it.' This is a common preposition error.

× every human being visit library in order to get some stuff inside their brain maybe.

✓ every human being visits the library in order to get some knowledge inside their brain, maybe.

The subject 'every human being' is singular, so the verb should be 'visits' (third person singular). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' here. 'Some stuff inside their brain' is vague; 'some knowledge inside their brain' is clearer. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement, article usage, and improve clarity.