Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'library' unnecessarily. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my hometown. However, I used to visit the library when I was in school because I loved reading stories, which had a calming effect on me."

例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my hometown. However, I used to visit the library when I was in school because I loved reading stories, which had a calming effect on me.

提案: Improve your vocabulary and sentence structure to sound more natural. Avoid vague phrases like 'plumbed up' which is incorrect. Use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "I usually read funny romance novels or scientific books in the library because they excite me and bring me joy."

例: I usually read funny romance novels or scientific books in the library because they excite me and bring me joy.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, "Yes, I often went to the library as a kid because I loved gaining knowledge and reading a variety of books and stories."

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a kid because I loved gaining knowledge and reading a variety of books and stories.

提案: Try to avoid vague statements and improve coherence by using linking words. For example, "Although I don't know Chinese kids personally, I think they often go to the library because their academic culture encourages them to study hard."

例: Although I don't know Chinese kids personally, I think they often go to the library because their academic culture encourages them to study hard.

× No I don't because I don't have a library near my hometown, but I used to go to library when I was in school and I loved reading books, especially stories.

✓ No I don't because I don't have a library near my hometown, but I used to go to the library when I was in school and I loved reading books, especially stories.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required to indicate a particular location. So, it should be 'go to the library'. This is a common error related to the use of articles in English.

× I usually read funny romance or scientific books at library.

✓ I usually read funny romance or scientific books at the library.

Similar to the previous error, 'at library' lacks the definite article 'the'. When referring to a specific place such as 'library', the definite article 'the' is necessary to specify the location. Therefore, it should be 'at the library'. This is an article usage error.

× Yes, I often went to library as a kid as I love obtaining more knowledge and reading varieties of books, stories, expanding my. Knowledge, knowledge.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library as a kid as I love obtaining more knowledge and reading varieties of books and stories, expanding my knowledge.

The phrase 'went to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, the sentence has a punctuation issue with 'expanding my. Knowledge, knowledge.' which should be corrected to 'expanding my knowledge.' The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' to specify the place. Additionally, the sentence structure is improved by connecting 'books and stories' properly and correcting the punctuation.