Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıtlayıp, nedenlerinizi açık ve net bir şekilde belirtin.

例: No, I don't go to the library often because I prefer studying at home where it's quiet. I find that I can concentrate better without distractions.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi sorunları mevcut. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve kütüphanede yaptığınız aktiviteleri açıkça belirtin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlaşılır yapmaya çalışın.

例: Although I don't go to the library often, when I do, I usually read books for pleasure rather than studying for exams.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman uyumu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Cevabınızı daha açık ve doğru zaman kullanarak ifade edin. Ayrıca, neden az gittiğinizi daha net açıklayın.

例: Yes, I went to the library sometimes when I was a kid, mainly to borrow books, but not very often.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam sorunları var. Ayrıca, soruya daha kesin ve net cevap vermeye çalışın. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirin.

例: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but since many cities in China are crowded, some children like to study in libraries to find a quiet place.

× I'm working in my home because I don't like to work in a crowded place and I think I am learning to say very how much faster.

✓ I work at home because I don't like to work in a crowded place and I think I am learning how much faster I can say things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present continuous tense 'I'm working' for a habitual action, which should be in the simple present tense 'I work'. Also, the phrase 'I am learning to say very how much faster' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be corrected to 'I am learning how much faster I can say things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Like before I said I don't like going to love you very, but the several times that I was in love with me, I often read books, not studying tests or studying to my exams.

✓ As I said before, I don't like going to the library very often, but the several times that I was there, I often read books, not studying for tests or exams.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and contains unclear phrases such as 'going to love you very' and 'studying to my exams'. The correct preposition is 'going to the library'. Also, 'studying for tests or exams' is the correct phrase. These corrections clarify the meaning and fix prepositional errors.

× Yes, but not too often because I when I was a kid I only go for books.

✓ Yes, but not too often because when I was a kid I only went to get books.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'go' when referring to a past action. The verb should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'go for books' is better expressed as 'went to get books' for clarity.

× I don't know about Chinese kids, but China is a very crowded city so of course some of the kids are love the library and go and study there.

✓ I don't know about Chinese kids, but China is a very crowded country so of course some of the kids love the library and go there to study.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'are love' which is a subject-verb agreement error; it should be 'love'. Also, 'China is a very crowded city' is incorrect because China is a country, not a city. The phrase 'go and study there' is better expressed as 'go there to study' for naturalness.