Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了去图书馆的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“more cost efficient more”和“enjoyed quite atmosphere”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复词汇，并使用正确的搭配，如“quiet atmosphere”。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because buying books can be expensive. Borrowing books is more cost-effective. Besides, I enjoy the quiet atmosphere there as it helps me be more productive.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“reading their”和“enhance”应为“enhances”。建议注意代词使用和动词单复数一致，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually do two things in the library. First, I enjoy reading fiction novels because they fascinate me. Moreover, I complete my homework there since the quiet atmosphere enhances my productivity and helps me focus.

提案: 回答中“connection capability”表达不准确，应为“concentration ability”或“focus”。建议使用更准确的词汇表达，并注意冠词使用，如“in the library”。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child. My mother valued my education and believed that the quiet and focused atmosphere in the library would help me improve my concentration and focus.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但“well equipped”应为“well-equipped”，且“education resources”更常用表达是“educational resources”。建议注意复合形容词的连字符和词汇准确性。

例: Yes, I firmly believe that most Chinese kids often go to the library because there are modern and well-equipped libraries across the country. These libraries offer free access to various books and educational resources.

× borrowing books is more cost efficient more.

✓ borrowing books is more cost efficient.

句中“more”重复使用，造成冗余，应去掉一个“more”。

× I enjoyed quite atmosphere there because it can creates higher productivity.

✓ I enjoyed the quiet atmosphere there because it can create higher productivity.

“quite”应为“quiet”，表示安静的；“atmosphere”前需加定冠词“the”；“creates”主语是“it”，应用第三人称单数形式，但“can”后动词用原形，故应为“create”。

× I usually engage in two tasks in library.

✓ I usually engage in two tasks in the library.

“library”前缺少定冠词“the”，表示特指图书馆。

× First, I enjoy reading their.

✓ First, I enjoy reading there.

“their”是物主代词，错误使用，应为副词“there”，表示“在那里”。

× Moreover, I will complete my homework in the library because the quiet atmosphere really enhance my productivity and help me focus.

✓ Moreover, I will complete my homework in the library because the quiet atmosphere really enhances my productivity and helps me focus.

主语“the quiet atmosphere”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“enhance”改为“enhances”，“help”改为“helps”。

× she believed that the quiet and focused atmosphere in library would help me improve my connection capability and the ability of concentration.

✓ she believed that the quiet and focused atmosphere in the library would help me improve my connection capability and the ability to concentrate.

“library”前缺少定冠词“the”；“the ability of concentration”表达不自然，应改为“the ability to concentrate”。

× there are modern and well equipped libraries across the country, and these libraries offer free access to various books and education resources.

✓ there are modern and well-equipped libraries across the country, and these libraries offer free access to various books and educational resources.

“well equipped”应连字符连接为“well-equipped”；“education resources”应为形容词形式“educational resources”。