Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Javobni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, to'g'ri grammatik tuzilmalardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I don't often go to the library, but I have decided to start visiting the Uzbekistan National Library in Tashkent from today.'

例: I don't often go to the library, but I have decided to start visiting the Uzbekistan National Library in Tashkent from today.

提案: Javobingizda mavzudan chalg'ish va takrorlanishlar bor. Savolga to'g'ridan-to'g'ri javob bering va qo'shimcha ma'lumotlarni mantiqiy bog'lang. Masalan, 'Usually, I read books in the library because it helps me learn new things.'

例: Usually, I read books in the library because it helps me learn new things.

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. To'g'ri vaqt shakllarini ishlating va gapni aniqroq qiling. Masalan, 'No, I didn't go to any library when I was a kid, but I started going to the library after I moved to Tashkent.'

例: No, I didn't go to any library when I was a kid, but I started going to the library after I moved to Tashkent.

提案: Javobingiz tushunarsiz va mavzudan chetga chiqilgan. Savolga aniq va mantiqiy javob bering. Masalan, 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them with their studies and improves their knowledge.'

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them with their studies and improves their knowledge.

× No, I often though I often don't go to the library, but I decided starting from today I want to go in Tashkent library.

✓ No, I often don't go to the library, but I have decided that starting from today I want to go to the Tashkent library.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'though' and mixes tenses. 'Though' is unnecessary here. The phrase 'decided starting from today' should be 'have decided that starting from today' to correctly express a recent decision. Also, 'go in Tashkent library' should be 'go to the Tashkent library' to use the correct preposition and article.

× And this library name is Uzbekistan National Library and it's.

✓ And this library's name is the Uzbekistan National Library.

The phrase 'this library name is' is incorrect; it should be 'this library's name is' to show possession. Also, 'Uzbekistan National Library' requires the definite article 'the' because it is a specific institution.

× Usually, but always when I go to the library I always read book and all again again read book What? What's your opinion? What did in your library here?

✓ Usually, whenever I go to the library, I always read books and read them again and again. What is your opinion? What do you do in your library here?

The sentence has redundant and unclear phrases like 'but always' and 'all again again'. 'Read book' should be plural 'read books' to indicate more than one. The question 'What did in your library here?' is incomplete and should be 'What do you do in your library here?' to be grammatically correct.

× No, when I was a kid I didn't go to any library and when I when I come in the Tashkent and I started go to the library.

✓ No, when I was a kid I didn't go to any library, but when I came to Tashkent, I started going to the library.

The verb 'come' should be in past tense 'came' to match the past context. 'Started go' is incorrect; it should be 'started going' using the gerund form after 'started'. Also, 'in the Tashkent' is incorrect; it should be 'to Tashkent'.

× Which is alive is because it pies and Kuwait winning from a young age for example, I heard. A way for and my students who want to study our work. This shows that libraries play an important role in the.

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library from a young age. For example, I have heard that many students who want to study work hard. This shows that libraries play an important role.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The corrected version restructures the sentences to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically. Unnecessary or incorrect words like 'pies', 'Kuwait winning', and incomplete sentences are removed or corrected.