Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语句不够连贯，有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I don't often go to the library because it is far from my home and I have limited free time due to work. Since I only have two days off each week, I usually prefer to rest rather than go out.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并用连接词组织内容。

例: Usually, I read books or practice English with others in the library. Also, if I have a final exam, I go there to study hard because I want to pass.

提案: 回答内容较简单，语法和表达有误，建议用更完整的句子表达原因，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I needed to read books. I enjoyed reading since writing was difficult for me, and reading helped improve my writing skills.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议明确表达观点，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并避免模糊表达。

例: Actually, Chinese kids do not often go to the library nowadays. However, when we were children, we often visited the library because it was a fun place to read and play.

× Now I only have two days off every week.

✓ Now I only have two days off every week.

该句中“two days”复数形式使用正确，无需修改。

× If I have time I will have a relax.

✓ If I have time, I will relax.

“have a relax”是不正确的表达，应该用动词“relax”表示放松。

× I should surely read some books in the library seem like or practice English with other people or do my homework there.

✓ I should surely read some books in the library or practice English with other people or do my homework there.

“seem like”在此处无意义，应删除。

× If I have a final taste final taste, I will go there study because I want to pass the exam.

✓ If I have a final test, I will go there to study because I want to pass the exam.

“final taste”应为“final test”，且“study”前应加介词“to”。

× Of course, I went to the library when I was a kid because I need to read some books there.

✓ Of course, I went to the library when I was a kid because I needed to read some books there.

主句为过去时，原因状语从句也应使用过去时。

× I like to read books and writing is hard for me to write, so I like to read some sentences. Help me to writing.

✓ I like to read books and writing is hard for me, so I like to read some sentences to help me write.

“Help me to writing”结构错误，应为“help me write”。

× We will have fun places to in the library and it's a fun place for us to play.

✓ We will have fun places in the library and it's a fun place for us to play.

“places to in the library”中“to”多余，应删除。