Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Actually I not go”应为“I don't often go”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: I don't often go to the library because I find it boring. However, I do visit it occasionally when I need to study for exams.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词如“first”，“then”来组织内容，同时具体说明使用的学习应用名称。

例: First, I make a to-do list of tasks for the day. Then, I complete them one by one, such as writing essays and watching lessons on a popular learning app called "Khan Academy."

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“they always don't like”应为“they usually don't like”。建议直接回答问题，避免泛泛而谈，并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。

例: When I was a child, I usually didn't like going to the library because I found it boring.

提案: 回答不够具体且语法错误较多，如“everyone will runs for it go”不正确。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并给出具体例子或原因。

例: Chinese kids often go to the library if they have clear study goals. For example, they visit the library to prepare for exams or complete homework.

× Actually I not go to the library very often because I think it's a boring places what I that I don't want to go and I will go there in the limited time to study for my examinations.

✓ Actually I do not go to the library very often because I think it's a boring place that I don't want to go to and I will go there in limited time to study for my examinations.

places是复数形式，但前面用的是单数的a，且句意指一个地方，应该用单数place。还有句中缺少助动词do，且介词to缺失。

× Actually I not go to the library very often because I think it's a boring places what I that I don't want to go and I will go there in the limited time to study for my examinations.

✓ Actually I do not go to the library very often because I think it's a boring place that I don't want to go to and I will go there in limited time to study for my examinations.

句中缺少助动词do来构成否定句，正确用法是do not go。

× Actually, what I do first is to write a list of what I was going to do today and then do one by one in the list, such as writing some passages and watching some lessons in you know, that is a very popular app in the students, so I often learn on it.

✓ Actually, what I do first is to write a list of what I am going to do today and then do them one by one in the list, such as writing some passages and watching some lessons in, you know, that is a very popular app among students, so I often learn on it.

was going to用在表达计划时应使用现在进行时am going to，且do one by one应改为do them one by one，表达更准确。

× Actually, what I do first is to write a list of what I was going to do today and then do one by one in the list, such as writing some passages and watching some lessons in you know, that is a very popular app in the students, so I often learn on it.

✓ Actually, what I do first is to write a list of what I am going to do today and then do them one by one in the list, such as writing some passages and watching some lessons in, you know, that is a very popular app among students, so I often learn on it.

lessons in you know, that is a very popular app in the students中students应为复数且介词用among更合适。

× You know, when everyone is a child, they always don't like to go to the library because it's a boring places that I really don't want to go.

✓ You know, when everyone is a child, they always don't like to go to the library because it's a boring place that I really don't want to go to.

places是复数形式，但前文用的是单数的a，应该用单数place。

× What I want to say is every kid in every country often go to the library if they have a determined target and everyone will runs for it go if they want to finish it very well.

✓ What I want to say is every kid in every country often goes to the library if they have a determined target and everyone will run for it if they want to finish it very well.

主语every kid是单数，动词go应加s变为goes；will后动词用原形run，不能用runs。