Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy by adding articles and plural forms. Also, make the answer more natural by adding a reason or detail. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books because I enjoy reading different genres."

例: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books because I enjoy reading different genres.

提案: Use consistent tense and add linking words to make the answer more coherent. For example, "I usually read a book or study there because it's a quiet place."

例: I usually read a book or study there because it's a quiet place.

提案: Correct past tense and article usage, and improve clarity by using linking words. For example, "Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I usually borrowed fiction books because my parents thought they were not suitable for me, but I liked reading them, so I borrowed them from the library."

例: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. I usually borrowed fiction books because my parents thought they were not suitable for me, but I liked reading them, so I borrowed them from the library.

提案: Improve sentence structure and use linking words for coherence. Also, correct grammar and article usage. For example, "Not really. In China, we often read online using devices like Kindles. Nowadays, not many people go to the library specifically for reading."

例: Not really. In China, we often read online using devices like Kindles. Nowadays, not many people go to the library specifically for reading.

× Yes, I often go to library to borrow some books to read.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to borrow some books to read.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular, countable, specific nouns is incorrect.

× Yes, I often go to library when I were a kid.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

Again, 'library' is a specific place and needs the definite article 'the'. Also, the verb tense should be past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid', and 'were' should be 'was' for first person singular.

× Yes, I often go to library when I were a kid.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid.

The action happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'went' instead of 'go'. Also, 'were' is incorrect for first person singular; it should be 'was'.

× Nowadays there's not many people going to library for reading specifically.

✓ Nowadays there aren't many people going to the library for reading specifically.

'Library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'there's' (there is) is singular and does not agree with the plural 'many people', so it should be 'there aren't'.

× my parents won't buy me those.

✓ my parents wouldn't buy me those.

Since the sentence refers to a past habitual action, the modal verb should be 'wouldn't' (past tense) instead of 'won't' (future).

× I usually borrow some fictions to read 'cause my parents won't buy me those.

✓ I usually borrow some fiction to read 'cause my parents wouldn't buy me those.

'Fiction' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'fictions'. Also, modal verb corrected as above.