Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Sua resposta contém erros gramaticais e falta de naturalidade. Evite expressões como "I'm never going" e prefira "I never go". Além disso, a frase "it's more easy" deve ser "it's easier". Tente ser mais claro e direto, evitando expressões como "That's it" que soam informais demais para o exame.

例: No, I never go to the library because it is not very popular in my area, and I find it easier to find what I want to read on the Internet.

提案: Sua resposta é boa, mas contém alguns erros gramaticais e repetições, como "any else else elsewhere". Use conectores para melhorar a fluidez, por exemplo, "because" e "which". Além disso, substitua "education materials" por "educational materials" para maior precisão.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read a variety of books, especially novels and educational materials, because they allow me to discover interesting topics and learn new things that I can't find elsewhere. Also, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

提案: Sua resposta está clara e bem estruturada, mas poderia ser mais natural se você usasse "school trips" em vez de "education tours". Além disso, tente usar mais conectores para ligar as ideias, como "which" ou "that".

例: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my school on trips, which were very valuable because they helped me understand the importance of reading books and how it can broaden my knowledge of the world.

提案: Sua resposta tem boas ideias, mas contém erros gramaticais, como "performs" que deveria ser "perform" para concordar com "students". Além disso, evite generalizações amplas e tente usar vocabulário mais variado e preciso.

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are hardworking and focused on their studies. For example, students usually visit libraries to find quiet places to read and do their homework, which helps them improve their knowledge and perform well in school.

× No, I'm never going to the library because it's not too popular in my region and it's more easy to find out what I want to read in the Internet.

✓ No, I never go to the library because it's not very popular in my region and it's easier to find what I want to read on the Internet.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm never going' which is a present continuous tense inappropriate for habitual actions; 'never go' is correct for habits. 'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. Also, 'in the Internet' should be 'on the Internet' due to preposition usage.

× No, I'm never going to the library because it's not too popular in my region and it's more easy to find out what I want to read in the Internet.

✓ No, I never go to the library because it's not very popular in my region and it's easier to find what I want to read on the Internet.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'Internet'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to the Internet.

× No, I'm never going to the library because it's not too popular in my region and it's more easy to find out what I want to read in the Internet.

✓ No, I never go to the library because it's not very popular in my region and it's easier to find what I want to read on the Internet.

'More easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. Also, 'too popular' is better expressed as 'very popular' in this context.

× Normally when I go to the library, I like to read a variety of books, especially novels and education materials.

✓ Normally when I go to the library, I like reading a variety of books, especially novels and educational materials.

'Like to read' is acceptable but 'like reading' is more natural in this context. Also, 'education materials' should be 'educational materials' as an adjective is needed to describe the materials.

× Normally when I go to the library, I like to read a variety of books, especially novels and education materials.

✓ Normally when I go to the library, I like reading a variety of books, especially novels and educational materials.

'Education materials' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'educational materials' to describe the type of materials.

× I enjoy this because it allows me to discover many interesting topics and learning new things that I wouldn't find any else else elsewhere.

✓ I enjoy this because it allows me to discover many interesting topics and learn new things that I wouldn't find anywhere else.

'Learning' should be 'learn' to maintain parallel structure with 'discover'. 'Any else else' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'anywhere else'.

× I enjoy this because it allows me to discover many interesting topics and learning new things that I wouldn't find any else else elsewhere.

✓ I enjoy this because it allows me to discover many interesting topics and learn new things that I wouldn't find anywhere else.

'Any else else' is a redundancy and incorrect; the correct expression is 'anywhere else'.

× And the quiet involvement also helps me concentrate better.

✓ And the quiet environment also helps me concentrate better.

'Involvement' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'environment' to describe the quiet surroundings.

× These visits were very valuable because they helped me understand the importance of reading books and how it can broaden my knowledge about the world.

✓ These visits were very valuable because they helped me understand the importance of reading books and how it could broaden my knowledge about the world.

The sentence mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense 'can'; to maintain tense consistency, 'can' should be changed to 'could'.

× For example, students usually visit libraries to find quiet places to read and do their homework.

✓ For example, students usually visit libraries to find quiet places to read and do their homework.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× This habit helps them improve their knowledge and performs well in school.

✓ This habit helps them improve their knowledge and perform well in school.

'Helps' is followed by the base form of the verb; 'performs' is incorrect and should be 'perform' to agree with 'them'.