Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and contains a grammatical error. Instead of 'I go to very often,' say 'Yes, I go to the library very often.' Also, add a reason or detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I go to the library very often because I enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Usually, people do not exercise in the library. Try to give a relevant and specific answer about activities you do in the library, such as reading or studying.

例: I usually read books or study for my classes when I am in the library.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Avoid jokes that may confuse the examiner. Instead, clearly state whether you went to the library as a child and provide a reason or example.

例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because I liked borrowing storybooks to read at home.

提案: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and contains grammatical errors. The question asks about library visits, so focus on that. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar.

例: No, Chinese kids don't often go to the library. Instead, they usually prefer going to the playground where they play games like pretend dog and cat fights.

× Yes, I go to very often.

✓ Yes, I go there very often.

The sentence is missing the object 'there' after 'go to', which is necessary to complete the phrase. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'there' clarifies the location being referred to.

× I usually do some exercise.

✓ I usually do some exercises.

The word 'exercise' in this context should be pluralized to 'exercises' because it refers to multiple activities or tasks done for practice or training. 'Exercise' as an uncountable noun refers to physical activity in general, but here 'some' implies countable items, so plural form is appropriate.

× I'm kidding because I'm a kid, so I go to do some exercise.

✓ I'm kidding because I'm a kid, so I go to the library to do some exercises.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. The phrase 'go to do some exercise' is incomplete without specifying the place. Adding 'the library' clarifies the location. Also, 'exercise' should be pluralized to 'exercises' as explained before.

× No Chinese kids often go to the playground.

✓ No Chinese kids often go to the library.

The original sentence contradicts the question about kids going to the library by mentioning the playground instead. To answer the question correctly, the location should be 'library'. Also, the sentence structure is acceptable but the content should align with the question.

× They like to play like a dog and cat fighting games.

✓ They like to play games like dog and cat fighting.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The phrase 'play like a dog and cat fighting games' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies that they like to play games similar to dog and cat fighting. The word order and phrasing are adjusted for clarity and grammatical correctness.