Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by adding articles and improving sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using linking words for coherence.

例: I often go to the library on weekends because I am free from work then, and I enjoy the peaceful environment there.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use correct grammar and more specific vocabulary to describe your activities.

例: In the library, I usually study and read various types of books, which helps me learn new things and relax.

提案: Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating the same phrases. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add specific details.

例: When I was a child, I often went to the library with my friends because I enjoyed the calm atmosphere, which made me feel relaxed.

提案: Even if you are not sure, try to give a general opinion or say what you have heard, using phrases like 'I think' or 'As far as I know'. This shows your ability to engage with the question.

例: I am not from China, but I think many Chinese kids visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× I like to go library on weekends because at that time I'm free from my work and I feel very happy and I like the environment of the library.

✓ I like to go to the library on weekends because at that time I'm free from my work and I feel very happy and I like the environment of the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the preposition 'to' is needed after 'go' when indicating a destination. So, 'go library' should be corrected to 'go to the library'.

× All too many activities in library.

✓ There are too many activities in the library.

The phrase 'All too many' is incorrect here; the correct quantifier is 'too many' to express an excessive amount. Also, the sentence lacks a verb and the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. Adding 'There are' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× I like to do study in the library and I read different type of books in the library.

✓ I like to study in the library and I read different types of books in the library.

The phrase 'do study' is incorrect; the verb 'study' does not require 'do' before it. Also, 'different type of books' should be pluralized to 'different types of books' to agree in number. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here.

× I went to library with my friends when I was a child and I like the environment of the library very much and I feel very relaxed when I went to the library.

✓ I went to the library with my friends when I was a child and I liked the environment of the library very much and I felt very relaxed when I went to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the verbs 'like' and 'feel' should be in the past tense 'liked' and 'felt' to maintain tense consistency with 'went'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper article usage.