Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Not really. The last time I went to a library was when I was in university. That was about five years ago.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
When I go to a library, I try and read books that I haven't come across before because I love to gain variety of knowledge from different field.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child and that was because I came from an average home where they are not exposed to certain things like library. But while growing up, I started going to the library when I entered university.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
I can't say because I'm not Chinese, but from the Chinese movies I have watched I think they prioritize martial arts to library.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 75.0提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and could be more natural by adding a reason or feeling about going to the library. Try to avoid just stating facts; instead, explain why you don't go often to make your answer more engaging.
例: Not really, I haven't been to the library for about five years since university because I usually prefer reading online articles nowadays.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 80.0提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid small grammar mistakes like 'from different field' which should be 'from different fields'.
例: When I go to the library, I usually read books I haven't encountered before because I love gaining knowledge from different fields, such as history and science.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 70.0提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit awkward and could be more natural. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'average home' and explain more specifically.
例: No, I didn't visit the library as a child because my family didn't have easy access to one. However, I began going to the library when I started university to support my studies.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Your answer is honest but lacks detail and contains grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and correct prepositions, for example, 'prioritize martial arts over the library'. Also, give a more balanced opinion or explain why you think so.
例: I am not sure because I'm not Chinese, but based on Chinese movies I've seen, it seems that children often focus more on martial arts training than visiting libraries.
文法
× I love to gain variety of knowledge from different field.
✓ I love to gain a variety of knowledge from different fields.
The phrase 'variety of knowledge' requires the article 'a' before 'variety' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'field' should be plural 'fields' because knowledge comes from multiple areas. So, the correct phrase is 'a variety of knowledge from different fields.'
× I think they prioritize martial arts to library.
✓ I think they prioritize martial arts over the library.
The verb 'prioritize' is usually followed by 'over' when comparing two things. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific concept. Therefore, the correct phrase is 'prioritize martial arts over the library.'
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