Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về tần suất và mục đích đến thư viện, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và đúng ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I often go to the library with my friends to study and complete our homework because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh dùng từ không rõ nghĩa như "doing something". Hãy liệt kê các hoạt động cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Usually, I read books and study with my friends in the library, and sometimes I also do research for my assignments.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và nói rõ hơn về thói quen khi còn nhỏ.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the library with my parents to read storybooks and learn new things.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đúng ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ hơn về thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc khi đến thư viện.

例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because our schools have many libraries, and students need to study hard for their exams.

× I often go to the library with my friend to study homework.

✓ I often go to the library with my friend to study or do homework.

The phrase 'study homework' is incorrect because 'homework' is something you do, not study. The correct verb is 'do' or you can say 'study' without 'homework'. So, 'study or do homework' is appropriate.

× I read the book, study with my friends and doing something.

✓ I read books, study with my friends and do something.

The sentence mixes verb forms and uses singular 'the book' which is too specific. Also, 'doing' should be 'do' to keep parallel structure. 'Books' is more natural when talking about general reading.

× I read the book, study with my friends and doing something.

✓ I read books, study with my friends and do something.

The verb 'doing' is incorrect here because it breaks the parallel structure of the sentence. All verbs should be in base form: 'read', 'study', 'do'.

× When I work in, I often went to the library with my parents.

✓ When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my parents.

The phrase 'When I work in' is incorrect and unclear. The question asks about childhood, so 'When I was a kid' is appropriate. Also, 'went' is correct past tense.

× I think many Chinese kids are often go to the library because our school have many library and we are so study work.

✓ I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because our school has many libraries and we have a lot of study work.

'Are often go' is incorrect; it should be 'often go'. 'School have' should be 'school has' for subject-verb agreement. 'Many library' should be 'many libraries' (plural). 'We are so study work' is incorrect; it should be 'we have a lot of study work'.