Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Try to respond directly with your own answer, starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding details if needed.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading and studying in a quiet environment.

提案: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide some details to support your response.

例: Usually, I read books or use the computer to research topics for my studies when I am at the library.

提案: You repeated the question instead of answering. Try to answer with a clear statement about your past experience and add some details.

例: Yes, I went to the library often as a kid because I loved borrowing storybooks and learning new things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Provide a clear opinion or fact about whether Chinese kids often go to the library, and support it with reasons or examples.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library, especially to study and complete their homework after school.

× Do you often go to the library?

✓ Yes, I often go to the library.

The student's response repeats the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error because the response lacks a verb and subject that answer the question. The student should provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question.

× What do you usually? What do you usually do in the library?

✓ I usually read books and study in the library.

The first sentence 'What do you usually?' is incomplete and does not form a proper question or answer. The second sentence repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it. This is a sentence structure error. The student should provide a complete sentence that answers the question clearly.

× Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid.

The student repeats the examiner's question instead of answering it. This is a sentence structure error because the response lacks a verb and subject that answer the question. The student should provide a complete sentence in the past tense to answer the question.

× Two Chinese kids often go to the library.

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library.

The student uses 'Two Chinese kids' which is specific and may not fit the general question about frequency. The question asks about 'Chinese kids' in general, so the plural form without a number is more appropriate. This is a singular and plural issue because the number 'Two' limits the meaning unnecessarily. The correction generalizes the subject to match the question.