Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "No, usually no." Instead, say "No, I don't often go to the library." Also, add linking words to improve flow, for example, "because I'm not fond of reading books; however, I sometimes read alone at home."

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I'm not fond of reading books; however, I sometimes enjoy reading alone at home.

提案: Your answer covers the main points but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases like "get help from these books"; instead, specify how the books help you.

例: In the library, I usually borrow books and read them quietly. If I need to take notes for my studies, these books provide useful information that helps me understand the topics better.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by combining sentences and adding linking words for better flow. For example, use "because" or "so" to connect ideas and add a topic sentence.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I usually studied at home, where my mother helped me a lot with my studies.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs grammatical corrections and better vocabulary. Use plural forms correctly ("kids"), and improve sentence structure. Also, avoid repetition of "peaceful" by using synonyms or rephrasing.

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. Whenever I visit, I see many children studying quietly there. The library provides a calm environment that attracts people of all ages for their studies.

× No, usually no. I do not go to library because I'm not fond of reading books.

✓ No, usually no. I do not go to the library because I'm not fond of reading books.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× No, I did not go to library when I was a kid.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is a common article error.

× I saw lots of Chinese kid studying there peacefully.

✓ I saw lots of Chinese kids studying there peacefully.

The word 'kid' is singular, but 'lots of' requires a plural noun. Therefore, 'kid' should be changed to its plural form 'kids' to agree with 'lots of'.

× The environment of library is very peaceful that every kind of people wants to be there for their studies.

✓ The environment of the library is very peaceful so that every kind of people wants to be there for their studies.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the conjunction 'that' is incorrectly used here; 'so that' better expresses the intended meaning of cause and effect.