Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

例: I don't often go to the library because it is far from my hometown. However, I enjoy reading at home and have even built a small personal library to keep my books organised.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Start with a clear topic sentence answering what you usually do in the library, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

例: I usually go to the library to study university subjects. For example, I review my lecture notes and complete assignments there because it is a quiet environment.

提案: Your answer is somewhat relevant but contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

例: I did not visit the library often as a child. However, my father used to go regularly and took me to the library for the first time when I was 18 years old.

提案: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with specific information or examples. Use correct grammar and vocabulary relevant to the topic.

例: I am not sure about the exact statistics, but I have heard that many Chinese children visit libraries regularly to study and read books.

× For me, I really rarely go to the library 'cause it's so far from my hometown, but I love reading in my home. I. Build a small library.

✓ For me, I really rarely go to the library because it's so far from my hometown, but I love reading at home. I have built a small library.

The phrase 'reading in my home' is better expressed as 'reading at home' because 'at' is the correct preposition for locations like home. Also, 'I. Build a small library.' is a sentence fragment and incorrect tense; it should be 'I have built a small library' to indicate a completed action relevant to the present.

× I. Build a small library.

✓ I have built a small library.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb form. Using the present perfect tense 'have built' correctly expresses the action of creating a small library that has relevance to the present.

× Are you usually study if there are no place to study?

✓ Do you usually study if there is no place to study?

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Are you usually study' which mixes auxiliary verbs improperly. The correct form for habitual actions is 'Do you usually study'. Also, 'no place' requires singular verb 'is' because 'place' is singular.

× I go to the library to study what I have learned from the university.

✓ I go to the library to study what I have learned at the university.

The preposition 'from' is less appropriate here; 'at the university' correctly indicates the location where the learning took place.

× I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but but my father used to and he took me when I was 18 years old to the library that.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but my father used to, and he took me to the library when I was 18 years old.

The sentence has repeated 'but' and awkward word order. The phrase 'to the library that' is incorrect; it should be 'to the library'. The past tense 'used to' is correctly used to describe habitual past actions. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I didn't search about that topic, but I've heard that agent people are go to the libraries daily.

✓ I haven't researched that topic, but I've heard that many people go to the libraries daily.

'I didn't search about' is incorrect; 'I haven't researched' is more appropriate. 'Agent people' is incorrect and unclear; 'many people' is the correct phrase. Also, 'are go' is incorrect; it should be 'go' for present simple tense describing habitual action.