Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlatım bozuklukları var. Cümlenizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için, neden kütüphaneye gittiğinizi açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlamlı yapmaya çalışın.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because my little sister is noisy at home, and I find it hard to concentrate. The library is very quiet, so I can study better there.

提案: Cümlenizde tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha doğal ve etkili cevaplar için, tekrar eden ifadelerden kaçının ve cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirin.

例: I usually study all my subjects in the library. Besides that, I enjoy reading novels and academic materials because the library is a great place for both.

提案: Cümleniz dilbilgisi açısından zayıf ve anlamı tam olarak ifade etmiyor. Daha doğru ve doğal cevaplar için, geçmiş zaman kullanımı ve sebep-sonuç ilişkisini net kurmaya özen gösterin.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred going to the park or doing more fun activities. I thought the library was not for children.

提案: Cevabınız soruya uygun değil ve anlamı belirsiz. Soruyu anlamaya çalışın ve eğer bilmiyorsanız, bunu kibarca ifade edin.

例: I'm not sure about that, but I think some Chinese kids do go to the library to study or read books.

× Yes because I had a little sister and she is 6 and she's make a little noise in house and I can't focus on my lessons so I go library and it's very quiet and I'm making more lessons.

✓ Yes, because I have a little sister and she is 6 and she makes a little noise in the house and I can't focus on my lessons, so I go to the library and it's very quiet and I study more lessons.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'had' instead of present tense 'have' to describe a current situation. Also, 'she's make' should be 'she makes' to agree with third person singular present tense. 'Go library' should be 'go to the library' to use the correct preposition. 'I'm making more lessons' is incorrect; it should be 'I study more lessons' to express habitual action. These corrections ensure proper tense usage and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes because I had a little sister and she is 6 and she's make a little noise in house and I can't focus on my lessons so I go library and it's very quiet and I'm making more lessons.

✓ Yes, because I have a little sister and she is 6 and she makes a little noise in the house and I can't focus on my lessons, so I go to the library and it's very quiet and I study more lessons.

The phrase 'she's make' is incorrect because the third person singular subject 'she' requires the verb to be in the third person singular form 'makes'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Yes because I had a little sister and she is 6 and she's make a little noise in house and I can't focus on my lessons so I go library and it's very quiet and I'm making more lessons.

✓ Yes, because I have a little sister and she is 6 and she makes a little noise in the house and I can't focus on my lessons, so I go to the library and it's very quiet and I study more lessons.

The phrase 'in house' should be 'in the house' to include the definite article. Also, 'go library' should be 'go to the library' because the verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place.

× No I didn't go that way when I when I was a kid because I would prefer go park or more fun of things. Library isn't for kids.

✓ No, I didn't go that way when I was a kid because I would prefer to go to the park or do more fun things. The library isn't for kids.

The phrase 'would prefer go park' is incorrect; it should be 'would prefer to go to the park' to use the infinitive form after 'prefer' and include the preposition 'to'. Also, 'more fun of things' is awkward and should be 'do more fun things'. 'Library isn't for kids' needs the definite article 'The' before 'library'.

× No I didn't go that way when I when I was a kid because I would prefer go park or more fun of things. Library isn't for kids.

✓ No, I didn't go that way when I was a kid because I would prefer to go to the park or do more fun things. The library isn't for kids.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb, so 'prefer go' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to go'. Also, 'go park' requires the preposition 'to' as in 'go to the park'.

× No I didn't go that way when I when I was a kid because I would prefer go park or more fun of things. Library isn't for kids.

✓ No, I didn't go that way when I was a kid because I would prefer to go to the park or do more fun things. The library isn't for kids.

The noun 'library' is a specific place and requires the definite article 'The' before it.

× I usually study all my lessons. Additionally, I read books and I really love to read books and I love novels. I love academics materials and it's really good place to make them.

✓ I usually study all my lessons. Additionally, I read books and I really love reading novels and academic materials. It's a really good place to study them.

The phrase 'I really love to read books and I love novels' is repetitive; combining them improves clarity. 'Academics materials' should be 'academic materials' (adjective form). 'It's really good place to make them' is incorrect; 'make' is not appropriate here, 'study' fits better. Also, 'a' is needed before 'really good place'.

× I love academics materials and it's really good place to make them.

✓ I love academic materials and it's a really good place to study them.

The adjective 'academics' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'academic'. Also, 'make them' is incorrect in this context; 'study them' is appropriate.

× I love academics materials and it's really good place to make them.

✓ I love academic materials and it's a really good place to study them.

The phrase 'really good place' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'really good place'.

× I don't know Chinese what to do.

✓ I don't know what Chinese people do.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning by restructuring the sentence properly.