Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy chú ý dùng số nhiều đúng với danh từ đếm được và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn.

例: I often go to the library because it provides a quiet environment where I can focus on studying. Also, I enjoy borrowing books, which helps me relax and learn new things.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'I usually read' thay vì 'I usually reading') và tránh lặp từ quá nhiều. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: In the library, I usually read books, but sometimes I also do my English or math homework there. Reading is my favorite activity when I visit the library.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu trả lời và sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách. Hãy trình bày ý một cách mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid. The first time I visited a library was when I was 14 years old, so I was already a teenager then.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu ý rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh nói chung chung và hoàn thiện câu với ý nghĩa đầy đủ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn.

例: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in their society nowadays.

× I often go to the library because I can borrow book and if have a quiet environment for me to dare to study a lot and in there I can feel I'm out of stress and have more fun when I'm when I can borrow many.

✓ I often go to the library because I can borrow books and it has a quiet environment for me to dare to study a lot. There, I can feel I'm out of stress and have more fun when I can borrow many.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'if have a quiet environment' is incorrect; it should be 'it has a quiet environment' to correctly express existence. Plural forms are necessary when talking about countable items in general.

× In the library I I usually reading books or sometimes I do some homework about English or maths.

✓ In the library, I usually read books or sometimes I do some homework about English or maths.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used here. After 'usually', the base form of the verb 'read' should be used instead of the present participle 'reading'. This is because 'usually' indicates a habitual action, which requires the simple present tense.

× But the most time I come there to reading book.

✓ But most of the time I come there to read books.

'Most time' should be 'most of the time' to express frequency correctly. Also, 'reading book' should be 'read books' to use the base verb form and plural noun for general meaning.

× I very like reading book.

✓ I really like reading books.

'Very' is incorrectly used to modify 'like'; the correct adverb is 'really'. Also, 'reading book' should be 'reading books' to indicate plural and general activity.

× I the first time I come to library is when I was 14 years old.

✓ The first time I came to the library was when I was 14 years old.

The past tense 'came' should be used instead of 'come' to indicate a past event. Also, 'is' should be 'was' to match the past tense context. The article 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× At that time, I'm not a kid anymore, I'm a teenager.

✓ At that time, I was not a kid anymore; I was a teenager.

Since the sentence refers to a past time, the past tense 'was' should be used instead of 'am'. This is a tense issue but also relates to subject-verb agreement in past tense.

× I think every kid in the world often goes to the library because the society now are very are very.

✓ I think every kid in the world often goes to the library because society now is very busy.

'Society' is a singular noun and should be followed by 'is' not 'are'. Also, the phrase 'are very are very' is incomplete and repetitive; it should be completed with an adjective like 'busy'.