Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library because I need to search for information related to my studies."

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me find information for my studies. Moreover, the quiet environment allows me to focus better.

提案: Improve your sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use correct prepositions and plural forms. For example, say "I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies."

例: I usually read books in the library because it is a quiet place, so I can concentrate on my studies without distractions.

提案: Make your answer more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Use past tense consistently. For example, say "Yes, when I was a kid, I used to go to the library to read books related to my school subjects."

例: Yes, when I was a kid, I used to go to the library regularly. I read many books that helped me understand my school subjects better.

提案: Avoid unclear and incorrect phrases. Express your opinion clearly and use linking words to compare. For example, say "I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in my country, India, many children visit libraries regularly."

例: I am not sure about Chinese children, but in India, many kids often go to the library to read and study.

× Yeah, yes, I often go to library and when I need searches something about I study and I sometimes go to library.

✓ Yeah, yes, I often go to the library and when I need to search something, I study and I sometimes go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'need searches' is incorrect; it should be 'need to search' to correctly use the verb after 'need'.

× I usually do reading book in library because there are quite a silent place and I can concentrate on my study in the library.

✓ I usually read books in the library because it is quite a silent place and I can concentrate on my studies in the library.

The phrase 'do reading book' is incorrect; the verb 'read' should be used directly. Also, 'books' should be plural to match general activity. 'There are quite a silent place' is incorrect; 'it is' should be used for singular 'place'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work generally.

× Yes, when I was a kid I go to. Open library and read. Read some book to relate it to my subject.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I went to the open library and read some books to relate them to my subjects.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'was'. 'Open library' should be preceded by 'the'. 'Read some book' should be 'read some books' for plural and 'them' to refer to books. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to indicate multiple areas of study.

× I think I don't know about it. Chinese people childish kid go to library or not.

✓ I think I don't know about it. Whether Chinese children go to the library or not.

The phrase 'Chinese people childish kid' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'Chinese children' to refer to kids. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; 'Whether' introduces the indirect question properly.

× But in my country India children go to library.

✓ But in my country, India, children go to the library.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, commas are added around 'India' as an appositive for clarity.