Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I usually read books on my phone, which is more convenient for me.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明活动，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: When I visit the library, I usually look for books related to my work and studies, such as computer science and mathematics, because reading them helps me refresh my knowledge.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态。

例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I didn't have a phone, and the books there were free to read.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，有语法和重复错误。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免重复。

例: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to libraries nowadays because they can easily access books on devices like iPhones or iPads.

× No, I really visited the library recently because I can read books using my cell phone and it's pretty accessible.

✓ No, I haven't visited the library recently because I can read books using my cell phone and it's pretty accessible.

这里的时间状语'recently'通常与现在完成时连用，表示最近一段时间内的经历。原句使用了一般过去时'visited'，不符合语境，应改为现在完成时'haven't visited'。

× When I read those books I I feel enjoyable a lot and it can refresh my memory, refresh myself.

✓ When I read those books, I feel very happy and it can refresh my memory and myself.

'enjoyable'是形容词，表示使人愉快的，不能用来描述人的感受。这里应使用表示感受的形容词'happy'或副词短语。并且句子中重复了'I'，需要删除多余部分。

× When I go to the library, I usually look for those books that related to my work and study such as computer science and mathematics.

✓ When I go to the library, I usually look for those books that are related to my work and study, such as computer science and mathematics.

'related'是过去分词，需与助动词'are'连用构成被动语态，表示'与...相关'。原句缺少'are'，导致语法错误。

× Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because at that time I didn't have a cell phone and if I wanted to read books, I have to go to the libraries most because the books are free.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because at that time I didn't have a cell phone and if I wanted to read books, I had to go to the library mostly because the books were free.

条件句中描述过去的习惯动作，主句应使用过去时'had to'，而不是现在时'have to'。另外，'libraries most'表达不自然，应改为'library mostly'。

× Well, from my point of view in recent years, Chinese, Chinese kids do not often go to the libraries because they are easy to access to the like to the iPhones or iPads.

✓ Well, from my point of view, in recent years, Chinese kids do not often go to the library because it is easy to access books on iPhones or iPads.

'easy to access to'中'to'多余，应去掉。'the like to the iPhones or iPads'表达不清，应改为'books on iPhones or iPads'。此外，'libraries'改为单数更符合习惯表达。