Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to give a direct response with clear sentences and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Use simple and correct grammar to express your idea naturally.

例: Yes, I sometimes go to the library because I enjoy reading books there. However, I don't go very often due to my busy schedule.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, add more specific details about your activities in the library.

例: Usually, I go to the library to find interesting books and read them quietly. Sometimes, I also go with my friends to study together.

提案: Your answer is somewhat understandable but needs clearer sentence structure and more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain why it was good for you.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library two or three times a week when I was a child. It was very helpful because it improved my reading skills and knowledge.

提案: Your answer is too general and contains grammatical errors. Avoid making broad statements without evidence. Use proper grammar and provide a balanced opinion with examples.

例: Many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and read books. They are usually hardworking and focused on their education.

× I would I like to go sometimes library I want, but sometimes I want library.

✓ I would like to go to the library sometimes, but sometimes I don't want to go.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions, making it hard to understand. The corrected sentence arranges words properly and adds the preposition 'to' before 'the library' to clarify the meaning.

× I go library, find books and try to read.

✓ I go to the library, find books, and try to read.

The preposition 'to' is necessary after the verb 'go' when indicating a destination. Without it, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Read books, find books, go with friends.

✓ I read books, find books, and go with friends.

The original sentence lacks a subject and conjunctions, making it incomplete. Adding 'I' and 'and' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Sometimes maybe two or three days in a week.

✓ Sometimes, maybe two or three days a week.

The phrase 'in a week' is incorrect here; 'a week' is the correct expression to indicate frequency. Also, adding a comma after 'Sometimes' improves readability.

× I think I got there in my childhood.

✓ I think I went there in my childhood.

The verb 'got' is incorrectly used here; 'went' is the correct past tense verb to indicate visiting a place. This correction aligns with the past tense context.

× Chinese kids every time go to library.

✓ Chinese kids go to the library all the time.

The phrase 'every time' is awkward here; 'all the time' is more natural. Also, 'to the library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× They are very good at study.

✓ They are very good at studying.

The noun 'study' should be in the gerund form 'studying' after the preposition 'at'. Using 'study' as a noun here is incorrect.