Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and complete. Avoid contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid incomplete sentences.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer using audiobooks. I have an application on my smartphone, and it is easier to listen to books while doing other activities nowadays.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Start with a direct response, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repetition and ensure verb tenses are correct.

例: I don't usually go to the library, but when I do, I choose an interesting book first. Then, I find a quiet and cozy place to sit down and read comfortably.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb tenses for clarity.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because there was no Internet at that time. Therefore, it was the only way to find interesting and appropriate books for my education.

提案: Your answer shows good reasoning but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar mistakes, such as articles and plural forms.

例: I am not sure about the exact situation, but I think Chinese kids often go to libraries because China is a very crowded country. Since many families have limited space at home, libraries provide a quiet and peaceful environment for studying.

× No, I don't often go to the library 'cause I use audiobooks.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I use audiobooks.

The use of 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for proper grammar and clarity.

× I have application in my smartphone and it is easier to listen books and nowadays I think it's.

✓ I have an application on my smartphone and it is easier to listen to books nowadays, I think.

The correct preposition is 'on' for devices, and 'listen to' is the correct verb-preposition combination. Also, 'an' is needed before 'application' as it is a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound.

× As I have mentioned, I don't go to the library, but when I was in library I choose the interesting book.

✓ As I have mentioned, I don't go to the library, but when I was in the library I chose an interesting book.

The past tense of 'choose' is 'chose'. Also, 'in the library' requires the definite article 'the'. 'An' is needed before 'interesting book' as it is singular and starts with a vowel sound.

× Then I find found out the quiet and cozy place for reading and sat down to read.

✓ Then I found a quiet and cozy place for reading and sat down to read.

The phrase 'find found out' is incorrect; 'found' is the past tense of 'find' and should be used alone. 'A' is needed before 'quiet and cozy place' as it is singular and countable.

× I used to go to the library when I was a kid because when I was a kid there was no Internet and I have to find interesting and appropriate books for my educational level, so it was the only way to find information.

✓ I used to go to the library when I was a kid because there was no Internet and I had to find interesting and appropriate books for my educational level, so it was the only way to find information.

The phrase 'I have to' should be in past tense 'I had to' to match the past context of the sentence.

× I don't have exact information about Chinese children, but I think that they often go to the libraries because China is very crowded country.

✓ I don't have exact information about Chinese children, but I think that they often go to libraries because China is a very crowded country.

'Libraries' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally. 'A' is needed before 'very crowded country' as it is singular and countable.

× They have no spaces in their own houses and the library is the best spot for quiet and peaceful environment.

✓ They have no space in their own houses and the library is the best spot for a quiet and peaceful environment.

'Space' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'spaces' here. Also, 'a' is needed before 'quiet and peaceful environment' as it is singular and countable.