Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'night breathing' and 'oftenly'. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, say 'I don't often go to the library now, but when I was a university student, I used to go frequently, especially during exams, because the library offers a quiet environment.'

例: I don't often go to the library these days. However, when I was a university student, I used to visit it frequently, especially during exam periods, because it provides a quiet and focused environment.

提案: Your answer should be more structured and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repetition like 'task and presentation'. Try to say, 'During my school days, when my teachers assigned tasks or presentations, I used to go to the library to complete them because it offers a quiet and separate environment.'

例: During my school days, whenever my teachers assigned tasks or presentations, I would go to the library to complete them because it provides a quiet and separate environment conducive to studying.

提案: Your answer should be more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain benefits clearly. For example, 'Yes, I used to visit the library as a child during school because it helped me improve my vocabulary and grammar. Moreover, it made learning enjoyable, which improved my speaking skills.'

例: Yes, I used to visit the library as a child during my school days because it helped me improve my vocabulary and grammar. Moreover, it made learning enjoyable, which enhanced my speaking skills.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a direct answer with supporting details using linking words. For example, 'Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. I remember when I was in college, my Chinese friend and I used to study together there and prepare presentations.'

例: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library. I remember when I was in college, my Chinese friend and I used to study together there and prepare presentations.

× I don't often go to the night breathing but the main thing is when I was a student in university then I oftenly go to the library especially during to my exam because the library as I give a lot of offers like a quiet environment.

✓ I don't often go to the night breathing but the main thing is when I was a student in university then I often go to the library especially during my exams because the library gives a lot of benefits like a quiet environment.

The word 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'during to my exam' is incorrect; it should be 'during my exams'. 'Library as I give a lot of offers' is incorrect; it should be 'library gives a lot of benefits'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× my teachers gives me a task or presentation.

✓ my teachers give me a task or presentation.

The subject 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives' to agree in number.

× Because libraries gives me a good environment and a separate environment so that's why.

✓ Because libraries give me a good and separate environment, so that's why.

The plural subject 'libraries' requires the plural verb 'give' instead of 'gives' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I visit the library when I was a child in my school time because library gives me a good offers and increase my vocabulary and my grammar skills and I also enjoy my learning skills and now I'm a good in a speaking skills.

✓ Yes, I visited the library when I was a child during my school time because the library gave me good opportunities and increased my vocabulary and grammar skills. I also enjoyed learning, and now I am good at speaking skills.

The verb 'visit' should be in past tense 'visited' to match 'was a child'. 'Library gives' should be 'library gave' for past tense consistency. 'Increase' should be 'increased'. 'Enjoy' should be 'enjoyed'. Also, 'a good in a speaking skills' is incorrect; it should be 'good at speaking skills'. These changes ensure tense consistency and correct expressions.

× NSR China's kids often go to the library.

✓ No, Chinese kids often go to the library.

'NSR' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence should start with 'No,' to answer the question properly. Also, 'China's kids' is better expressed as 'Chinese kids'.

× I still remember that the then I was at college, my friends, my friend was a Chinese and we went to a We went to the library each other and we make a together presentations and then I seen my Chinese.

✓ I still remember that when I was at college, my friend was Chinese and we went to the library together. We made presentations together, and then I saw my Chinese friend.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors: 'the then I was at college' should be 'when I was at college'; 'my friends, my friend was a Chinese' should be 'my friend was Chinese'; 'we went to a We went to the library each other' is incorrect and should be 'we went to the library together'; 'we make a together presentations' should be 'we made presentations together'; 'I seen my Chinese' should be 'I saw my Chinese friend'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.