Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, I often go to the library 3 or 4 times a week.
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
Actually I often borrow books. Sometimes I usually reading book in the library.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
Understand when I was a kid I didn't used to go to the library because in my hometown there was many libraries and my parents was so busy that I can't.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
Yeah, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because in their country studying is very important, so they should learn more and more, and library is the best place to study.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trực tiếp, tuy nhiên bạn có thể làm cho câu trả lời thêm phong phú bằng cách giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thường đến thư viện hoặc bạn làm gì ở đó. Hãy tránh lặp lại số lần quá nhiều và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
例: Yes, I often go to the library three or four times a week because I find it a quiet place to focus on my studies and borrow interesting books.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh dùng từ lặp lại như 'often' và 'usually' cùng lúc. Hơn nữa, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: I usually borrow books to read at home, but sometimes I also read books in the library because it is quiet and comfortable.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 50.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách, số nhiều/số ít, và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và cụ thể.
例: When I was a kid, I didn't use to go to the library because there were not many libraries in my hometown, and my parents were too busy to take me there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'more and more'. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: Yes, I believe Chinese children frequently visit libraries because education is highly valued in their culture, and libraries provide an ideal environment for focused learning.
文法
× Sometimes I usually reading book in the library.
✓ Sometimes I usually read books in the library.
The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used here; after 'usually' the base form of the verb 'read' should be used. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the context of borrowing or reading multiple books.
× Understand when I was a kid I didn't used to go to the library because in my hometown there was many libraries and my parents was so busy that I can't.
✓ When I was a kid, I didn't use to go to the library because in my hometown there were many libraries and my parents were so busy that I couldn't.
The phrase 'didn't used to' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't use to' because 'did' already indicates past tense. 'There was many libraries' should be 'there were many libraries' to agree in number. 'My parents was' should be 'my parents were' for subject-verb agreement. 'I can't' should be 'I couldn't' to match past tense.
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