Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can read many interesting magazines and learn new things.

提案: 回答内容较为简洁，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意动词形式的正确使用。

例: I usually search for magazines about geography, and then I put on my earphones to concentrate on my work.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免重复。

例: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, my dad and I went to the library every weekend. I liked reading novels there.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，表达略显简单，建议使用更准确的时态和丰富的词汇。

例: No, I don't think so. Many Chinese kids are addicted to online games, so they don't spend enough time studying in the library.

× there's lots of magazines for me to have a look.

✓ there are lots of magazines for me to have a look.

这里的主语是复数名词 magazines，应该用复数形式的动词 are，而不是单数形式的 there's。

× there's nothing that me feel that me to be agitated.

✓ there's nothing that makes me feel agitated.

这里的 me 用法错误，应该用主格或宾格形式的代词。正确表达是 'makes me feel'，而不是 'me feel that me to be'。

× I usually go searching for magazines with geography topics

✓ I usually go searching for magazines on geography topics

介词用法错误，应该用 on 来表示关于某个主题的杂志，而不是 with。

× my dad and I would go to library every weekend

✓ my dad and I would go to the library every weekend

表示特定的图书馆时，应该加定冠词 the。

× I would like to see novels and using cell phone when I was a kid.

✓ I would like to read novels and use a cell phone when I was a kid.

动词形式错误，'would like to' 后面应该接动词原形，不能用动名词 using。

× Lots of Chinese kids were addicted on online games.

✓ Lots of Chinese kids are addicted to online games.

短语 'be addicted to' 是固定搭配，不能用 'addicted on'。另外，时态应与上下文一致，描述现在的情况用现在时。

× They would not spend enough time studying in library.

✓ They do not spend enough time studying in the library.

描述习惯性事实时应使用一般现在时，且 'in library' 应加定冠词 'the'。