Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: សូមប្រើពាក្យដែលមានភាពធម្មតា និងច្បាស់លាស់ជាងនេះ ហើយព្យាយាមបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិតដើម្បីធ្វើឲ្យចម្លើយរបស់អ្នកមានភាពទាក់ទាញ និងមានប្រយោជន៍។ កុំប្រើពាក្យដែលមិនចាំបាច់ ហើយព្យាយាមប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលសមរម្យសម្រាប់បរិបទ។

例: Yes, I often visit the library because it is a peaceful environment where I can concentrate on my studies. Additionally, I enjoy borrowing books since it saves money compared to purchasing them.

提案: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពាក្យដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ព្យាយាមបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិត និងប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលសមរម្យ។ កុំប្រើពាក្យដែលមិនត្រឹមត្រូវ ឧទាហរណ៍ "read book" គួរតែជា "read books"។

例: I usually go to the library because it is quiet there. I like to read books and also do my homework in a calm environment.

提案: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគត្រឹមត្រូវ និងពាក្យដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ព្យាយាមបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិត និងប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសដែលសមរម្យ។ កុំភ្លេចប្រើ linking words ដើម្បីធ្វើឲ្យចម្លើយរបស់អ្នកមានភាពសម្រួល។

例: I didn't go to the library when I was a child because there wasn't one nearby. Also, my parents usually bought books for me to read at home.

提案: សូមប្រើ linking words ដើម្បីធ្វើឲ្យចម្លើយរបស់អ្នកមានភាពសម្រួល និងមានលក្ខណៈត្រឹមត្រូវ។ ព្យាយាមបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិត និងប្រើពាក្យដែលសមរម្យសម្រាប់បរិបទ។

例: Not all Chinese children often visit the library because many live far away from one. Moreover, their parents usually buy books for them to read at home.

× I read book and I also like do homework.

✓ I read books and I also like to do homework.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items in general. Also, the verb 'do' needs 'to' before it when used after 'like' in this context.

× I didn't go to the library when I worked because the library didn't nearby and my parents also buy book to me.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because the library wasn't nearby and my parents also bought books for me.

The phrase 'when I worked' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a kid' to match the question. 'Didn't nearby' is incorrect; it should be 'wasn't nearby' to express location in the past. 'Buy book to me' is incorrect; it should be 'bought books for me' to use the correct past tense and preposition.

× I didn't go to the library when I worked because the library didn't nearby and my parents also buy book to me.

✓ I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because the library wasn't nearby and my parents also bought books for me.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match the past context.

× Not all Chinese kids often go to the library because many of them live far from one and their parents usually buy books for them to read at home.

✓ Not all Chinese kids often go to the library because many of them live far from one, and their parents usually buy books for them to read at home.

The sentence is mostly correct, but a comma is added before 'and' to improve sentence structure. No singular/plural error here, but the sentence is included for completeness.