Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и лаконичным. Избегайте излишних повторов и уточните формулировки, например, "practicing in preparing" звучит неестественно. Также можно добавить связующее слово для плавности.

例: I didn't use to go to the library often because I wasn't very interested in reading. However, recently I've been visiting more frequently to improve my English speaking and reading skills while preparing for my health exam.

提案: Ответ структурирован хорошо, но есть небольшие повторы и ошибки, например, "when it when I don't". Рекомендуется использовать более плавные связки и избегать тавтологии.

例: It depends on my purpose. If I need a specific book, I quickly find and borrow it to read at home. Otherwise, I enjoy exploring different sections and browsing various books.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и нечеткие формулировки, например, "I need I like to browse". Также есть противоречие: сначала говорится, что не любил читать, потом что чтение было любимым хобби. Следует избегать таких несоответствий и улучшить связность.

例: When I was a kid, I didn't enjoy reading much, but I visited the library about once a week. I liked browsing comics and adventure stories because they inspired me and sparked my curiosity.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточные слова, например, "many of Chinese kids" и "for to prepare". Также стоит использовать более точные выражения и связки для улучшения естественности речи.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often go to libraries after school. Libraries are great places for learning and finding extra information to prepare for exams. From what I've seen in Chinese dramas, libraries are considered important places for focused study.

× However, recently I have been visiting the library more frequently to practice my English speaking and reading skills as I'm practicing in preparing for my health exam.

✓ However, recently I have been visiting the library more frequently to practice my English speaking and reading skills as I'm preparing for my health exam.

The phrase 'practicing in preparing' is incorrect because 'practicing' should not be followed by 'in' plus another verb in the '-ing' form. The correct form is 'I'm preparing' to indicate the ongoing action of preparation.

× However, when it when I don't have a particular book in mind, I like to explore different sections and look through various books.

✓ However, when I don't have a particular book in mind, I like to explore different sections and look through various books.

The phrase 'when it when' contains a redundant conjunction 'when it'. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× I need I like to browse different kinds of books, especially comics and adventure stories because they help me feel inspired and curious about new things, even though reading was my favorite hobby.

✓ I like to browse different kinds of books, especially comics and adventure stories because they help me feel inspired and curious about new things, even though reading was my favorite hobby.

The phrase 'I need I like' is incorrect and seems to be a typographical error. Removing 'I need' corrects the sentence and maintains the present tense 'I like' to express habitual action.

× Yes, many of Chinese kids and toddlers often go to the libraries after school.

✓ Yes, many Chinese kids and toddlers often go to the library after school.

The phrase 'many of Chinese kids' is incorrect; it should be 'many Chinese kids' without 'of'. Also, 'libraries' is changed to 'library' to refer to the general place kids go to after school.

× It's the best place for learning and searching for additional information for to prepare for their exams and for their studies.

✓ It's the best place for learning and searching for additional information to prepare for their exams and their studies.

The phrase 'for to prepare' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to prepare' without 'for' before the infinitive verb. Also, 'for their studies' is sufficient without the extra 'for'.