Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use the present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, make your sentences more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing specific reasons.

例: Yes, I often go to the library on weekends or during my free time because I believe reading is essential for learning and personal growth.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is a bit vague. Use the correct verb forms and try to give more specific details about what kinds of books you read or activities you do in the library. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Usually, I sit quietly in the library and read books that interest me, such as novels or educational materials, because I find reading very important for expanding my knowledge.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to clearly state whether you went to the library as a child and explain why or why not, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid irrelevant information and focus on the question.

例: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a child because I was not familiar with it. Instead, my parents encouraged me to visit the temple when I felt scared.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to provide a clear and logical response with relevant reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague expressions like 'daily dream lives'.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries because China is a developed country that values education. Reading plays an important role in their learning and daily lives, so libraries are popular places for them.

× Yes, generally I went to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to reading books because reading plays an important role in in their education field.

✓ Yes, generally I go to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to read books because reading plays an important role in their education field.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'went' when the question asks about a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'go'. Also, 'to reading' should be 'to read' because after 'to' (as a preposition here), the base form of the verb is used. Additionally, the phrase 'in in their education field' has a repeated preposition and 'their' is unclear; it should be 'in education' or 'in the education field.'

× Yes, generally I went to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to reading books because reading plays an important role in in their education field.

✓ Yes, generally I go to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to read books because reading plays an important role in their education field.

After the preposition 'to' in this context, the verb should be in its base form 'read' rather than the gerund 'reading'. Using 'to reading' is incorrect here.

× Yes, generally I went to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to reading books because reading plays an important role in in their education field.

✓ Yes, generally I go to the libraries on the weekends or in my spare time to read books because reading plays an important role in their education field.

The phrase 'in in their education field' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. Also, 'their' is ambiguous here; it should be 'in education' or 'in the education field' to be clear and grammatically correct.

× I generally sit in the library and reading books according to my mood or because reading is the one of the most important things in the human's life.

✓ I generally sit in the library and read books according to my mood because reading is one of the most important things in human life.

The verb 'reading' should be 'read' to maintain parallel structure with 'sit' and to correctly express habitual action. Also, 'the one of the most important things' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the most important things'. 'The human's life' is incorrect; it should be 'human life' without the article and possessive.

× I generally sit in the library and reading books according to my mood or because reading is the one of the most important things in the human's life.

✓ I generally sit in the library and read books according to my mood because reading is one of the most important things in human life.

The phrase 'the one of the most important things' is incorrect because 'one of' already specifies a subset, so 'the' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I generally sit in the library and reading books according to my mood or because reading is the one of the most important things in the human's life.

✓ I generally sit in the library and read books according to my mood because reading is one of the most important things in human life.

The phrase 'the human's life' incorrectly uses the possessive pronoun 'human's'. It should be 'human life' as a general concept without possessive.

× Not I don't go to the library when I was scared because I did not wear about the libraries when I'm when I was child, my parents taught me to go to the temple if I scare from the everything, so I generally go to the temple rather than the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was scared because I did not know about the libraries when I was a child. My parents taught me to go to the temple if I was scared of anything, so I generally went to the temple rather than the library.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors: 'Not I don't go' is incorrect; it should be 'No, I didn't go'. 'Did not wear about' is incorrect; it should be 'did not know about'. 'When I'm when I was child' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. 'If I scare from the everything' is incorrect; it should be 'if I was scared of anything'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Not I don't go to the library when I was scared because I did not wear about the libraries when I'm when I was child, my parents taught me to go to the temple if I scare from the everything, so I generally go to the temple rather than the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was scared because I did not know about the libraries when I was a child. My parents taught me to go to the temple if I was scared of anything, so I generally went to the temple rather than the library.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the events happened in the past, past tense verbs like 'didn't go', 'did not know', 'was scared', and 'went' should be used consistently.

× Not I don't go to the library when I was scared because I did not wear about the libraries when I'm when I was child, my parents taught me to go to the temple if I scare from the everything, so I generally go to the temple rather than the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was scared because I did not know about the libraries when I was a child. My parents taught me to go to the temple if I was scared of anything, so I generally went to the temple rather than the library.

The phrase 'scare from the everything' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'scared of anything'. Also, 'did not wear about' is incorrect; it should be 'did not know about'.

× Yes, Chinese kids go to the library because the China is the one of the developed country in the world.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library because China is one of the developed countries in the world.

'The China' is incorrect; 'China' does not need 'the'. 'The one of the developed country' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the developed countries' to match plural form.

× Yes, Chinese kids go to the library because the China is the one of the developed country in the world. So their child are also very intelligent.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids go to the library because China is one of the developed countries in the world. So their children are also very intelligent.

'Their child' is singular but refers to multiple children; it should be 'their children'.

× So their child are also very intelligent.

✓ So their children are also very intelligent.

The subject 'child' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural. The correct plural form is 'children' to agree with the plural verb 'are'.

× Reading books is play an important role in all their education or in their daily dream lives.

✓ Reading books plays an important role in their education and daily lives.

The phrase 'is play' is incorrect; it should be 'plays'. 'In all their education or in their daily dream lives' is awkward and incorrect; 'in their education and daily lives' is clearer and grammatically correct. 'Dream lives' is unclear and likely incorrect.

× Reading books is play an important role in all their education or in their daily dream lives.

✓ Reading books plays an important role in their education and daily lives.

'Reading books' is a singular subject and requires the verb 'plays' (third person singular), not 'play'.

× So I think the Chinese kids are going to a fun library.

✓ So I think Chinese kids enjoy going to the library.

The phrase 'are going to a fun library' is awkward and unclear. 'Enjoy going to the library' is a more natural and grammatically correct expression.