Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'do linguine' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng.

例: I don't often go to the library because I have many deadlines and need to study at home. Also, I spend a lot of time at school, so I rarely find time to visit the library.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'boring book'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ.

例: I usually go to the library to find useful books and materials. I borrow interesting books that help me improve my knowledge.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

例: I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because there were strict rules. For example, you had to be at least 18 years old to borrow books.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ không đúng nghĩa.

例: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library, but the library environment is very modern. Schools encourage students to read more books to improve their knowledge.

× I'm not gonna say that I often go to the library because, uh, like I have many deadlines at home, so I need to do linguine and I also don't have time because I need to go to school to learn and help encourage my knowledge.

✓ I'm not going to say that I often go to the library because I have many deadlines at home, so I need to do linguine and I also don't have time because I need to go to school to learn and improve my knowledge.

The phrase 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'going to' in formal speech. Also, 'help encourage my knowledge' is awkward; 'improve my knowledge' is more appropriate.

× So I didn't go to library.

✓ So I didn't go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Missing 'the' causes an article error.

× But actually I still go to the library and I'm usually like go to them and find some useful book and material for me.

✓ But actually, I still go to the library and I usually go there to find some useful books and materials for me.

The phrase 'I'm usually like go to them' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'I usually go there'. Also, 'book' and 'material' should be plural to match 'some'.

× I borrow boring book to help me encourage my knowledge and will help me more knowing.

✓ I borrow books to help me improve my knowledge and help me learn more.

'Boring book' is likely a mishearing or misuse; 'books' should be plural. 'Encourage my knowledge' is incorrect; 'improve my knowledge' is better. 'Will help me more knowing' is ungrammatical; 'help me learn more' is correct.

× And not often go to the library when I was a kid, because you know that in library like there is some rule that was distinction of an at least if you want to borrow something, at least you need to have a a of a 18 years old.

✓ I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because, you know, in the library there were some rules that required you to be at least 18 years old to borrow something.

The sentence lacks proper past tense forms ('did not go', 'there were'). The phrase 'distinction of an at least' is unclear and corrected to 'required you to be at least'. Also, 'a 18 years old' should be '18 years old' without 'a'.

× I cannot say that Chinese kids are often go through the library, but I can see that the environments were in there is very chic.

✓ I cannot say that Chinese kids often go to the library, but I can see that the environment there is very good.

'Are often go' is incorrect; it should be 'often go'. 'Go through the library' is incorrect; 'go to the library' is correct. 'Environments were in there is very chic' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'the environment there is very good'.

× So they are encouraging their students to read more books to encourage the knowledge their knowledge and make them more choose.

✓ So they are encouraging their students to read more books to improve their knowledge and help them make better choices.

'Encourage the knowledge their knowledge' is repetitive and incorrect; 'improve their knowledge' is better. 'Make them more choose' is ungrammatical; 'help them make better choices' is correct.