Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I don't often go to the library because I find studying at home more comfortable and it helps me concentrate better.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời có phần không liên quan (xem phim Netflix trong thư viện). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh thông tin không phù hợp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually do my homework in the library because it's quiet and helps me focus. After finishing, I like to read books or review my notes.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng, trả lời rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.

例: I don't really remember clearly, but I think I went to the library with my mom when I was a child. I remember it was a quiet and pleasant place.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ phù hợp hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because it offers many useful resources and books that help them with their studies. It's a highly recommended place for students.

× Honestly, I do not often go to the library because I love studying at home because it makes me feels like cozy and comfortable when and I can focus on my.

✓ Honestly, I do not often go to the library because I love studying at home since it makes me feel cozy and comfortable and I can focus on my work.

The verb 'feels' should be 'feel' because the subject 'it' is singular and the verb should be in base form after 'makes'. Also, 'feels like cozy and comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'feel cozy and comfortable'. The sentence structure is improved by removing redundant 'because' and fixing conjunctions.

× I usually do my homework in a library because I love that choir, but after I finish my homework I will watch movie on Netflix or catch up with.

✓ I usually do my homework in the library because I love that quiet place, but after I finish my homework I will watch a movie on Netflix or catch up with shows.

The article 'a' is needed before 'library' if it is not a specific one, but here 'the library' is better as a known place. 'That choir' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'that quiet'. 'Watch movie' needs an article 'a movie'. 'Catch up with' needs an object, so 'shows' is added for clarity.

× Honestly, I not really remember, but if I remember right I did went to the library when I was young and I go to with my mom.

✓ Honestly, I do not really remember, but if I remember right I did go to the library when I was young and I went with my mom.

The phrase 'did went' is incorrect; after 'did' the base form 'go' should be used. 'I go to with my mom' should be 'I went with my mom' to maintain past tense consistency.

× The first thing I see that quite nice and.

✓ The first thing I saw was that it was quite nice.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. 'See' should be past tense 'saw' to match past context. The sentence needs a verb 'was' and a complete clause to be grammatically correct.

× Personally I think yes, because the library is very useful for them. It provides a resources available and a lot of books which they need and that is a recommend place for students.

✓ Personally, I think yes, because the library is very useful for them. It provides resources and a lot of books which they need, and that is a recommended place for students.

'A resources' is incorrect because 'resources' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Recommend place' should be 'recommended place' as an adjective form. Commas are added for clarity.