Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting it to 3-4 sentences.

例: Yes, I often visit the library to read books and novels. It provides a quiet and comfortable environment, which helps me focus on my studies without distractions. I really enjoy spending time there.

提案: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same words. Also, try to be more specific about your activities in the library.

例: In the library, I usually read novels and magazines because it offers a quiet environment. Occasionally, I listen to music or podcasts with my headphones to relax while studying.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, try to add a linking word to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my parents when I was a kid. It was a pleasant experience because I could focus on my studies there. Moreover, the library was a great place to do homework.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit long and repetitive. Try to use linking words to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your opinion.

例: No, I don't think Chinese kids often visit the library nowadays. Since we live in the digital era, most children prefer spending time on gadgets, watching cartoons, or reading comics online instead of going to the library.

× Yes, I frequently visit to the library for reading books and novels.

✓ Yes, I frequently visit the library to read books and novels.

The verb 'visit' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. Also, 'for reading' is better expressed as 'to read' to indicate purpose clearly.

× Library provide a quiet environment to focus on studies and as well as the reading without any distractions and it's provide a comfortable seats and I also enjoy the reading books in library.

✓ The library provides a quiet environment to focus on studies as well as reading without any distractions, and it provides comfortable seats. I also enjoy reading books in the library.

The subject 'Library' is singular and requires the verb 'provides' (third person singular). 'Seats' is plural, so 'comfortable seats' is correct. Also, 'the reading' is unnecessary; 'reading' alone suffices.

× I usually do reading books in the library like novels and magazines and I prefer to reading in the library because it's provide a quite and quite environment as quiet environment and I usually prefer occasionally I listen to the music and podcast with my headphones.

✓ I usually read books in the library, like novels and magazines, and I prefer reading in the library because it provides a quiet environment. Occasionally, I listen to music and podcasts with my headphones.

The verb 'do' is not used with 'reading' in this context; 'read' is the correct verb. 'Prefer to reading' should be 'prefer reading' or 'prefer to read'. 'It's provide' should be 'it provides' for subject-verb agreement. 'Quite and quite environment as quiet environment' is redundant and incorrect; 'quiet environment' is sufficient.

× Yes, I go to the library when I was a kid with my parents.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid with my parents.

The action happened in the past, so the past tense 'went' should be used instead of the present tense 'go'.

× It was a It was a very pleasant time to spend time with my parents also and I focus on my studies and library is a better place to do homework and studies when you were a child.

✓ It was a very pleasant time to spend with my parents, and I focused on my studies. The library is a better place to do homework and study when you are a child.

The sentence is repetitive and lacks proper punctuation. 'Focus' should be in past tense 'focused' to match the past context. 'Studies' is better as 'study' in this context. 'When you were a child' is changed to 'when you are a child' to generalize the statement.

× No, I don't think that the Chinese kids often go to the library because today is era of technology, digital technology and all the children spend time on their gadgets and mobile phones to to listen the news stories and comics and and cartoons also.

✓ No, I don't think that Chinese kids often go to the library because today is the era of digital technology, and all children spend time on their gadgets and mobile phones to listen to news stories, comics, and cartoons as well.

'Today is era' needs the definite article 'the' before 'era'. 'To to listen' is a repetition error; only one 'to' is needed. 'And and' is a repetition error. 'Also' is better replaced with 'as well' at the end for smoother flow.