Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且直接，但可以更具体说明去图书馆的原因或感受，使内容更丰富。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading a variety of books. Usually, I visit twice a week to borrow new novels and study in a quiet environment.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅。

例: In the library, I usually pick out books that interest me and then find a quiet spot to read them comfortably.

提案: 时态使用不准确，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的过去时态并补充具体细节。

例: I didn't go to the library much when I was a child, but I started enjoying reading a lot when I was in senior high school.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅，建议简化句子并使用正确的语法结构。

例: I haven't thought about this before, but from what I know, Chinese kids don't go to the library very often.

× Well to be honest I usually choose the book what I want to read in the library and also I sometimes I will choose to sit on the library to read my books.

✓ Well, to be honest, I usually choose the book that I want to read in the library, and also sometimes I choose to sit in the library to read my books.

句中使用了错误的关系代词“what”，应使用“that”来引导定语从句。此外，句子中“sometimes I will choose to sit on the library”中的“on the library”应改为“in the library”，表示在图书馆内。

× Well, to be honest, I'm not interested in reading books when I was young since I was a Senior High School student. I fall in love with reading.

✓ Well, to be honest, I wasn't interested in reading books when I was young. Since I was a Senior High School student, I fell in love with reading.

描述过去的情况时，动词时态应使用过去式。“I'm not interested”应改为“wasn't interested”，“I fall in love”应改为“fell in love”。

× To be honest, that question I have never been think think about that maybe as I know Chinese kids are not very often go to the library.

✓ To be honest, I have never thought about that question. As far as I know, Chinese kids do not often go to the library.

原句中“that question I have never been think think about that”语序混乱且重复，应调整为“I have never thought about that question”。另外，“Chinese kids are not very often go to the library”语法错误，应改为“Chinese kids do not often go to the library”。