Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些重复和啰嗦。建议简洁表达，避免重复“by my computer or by my phone”，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

例: I don't visit the library often because I usually find the information I need online using my phone or computer, which is more convenient.

提案: 回答结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答，再用连接词补充细节，注意语法和句子通顺。

例: I usually read books and look for information that I can't find online. For example, some offline books have unique content that helps me with my studies.

提案: 回答较好，但有些重复“when I was a kid”和“when I was a child”。建议用更丰富的词汇和句式表达原因和经历。

例: I often visited the library as a child because I didn't have access to phones or computers, so reading books was my main source of entertainment.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“they still reading”应为“they are still reading”。建议注意时态和语法，同时可以用更具体的例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I believe many Chinese children visit libraries often. For instance, whenever I go, I see numerous kids quietly reading, even when the library is crowded and seats are limited.

× Although someone may not have their seats, they still reading carefully and silently.

✓ Although someone may not have their seats, they are still reading carefully and silently.

这里缺少助动词“are”，导致动词“reading”不能正确构成现在进行时。现在进行时需要助动词“be”加动词的-ing形式。建议在“they”后加上“are”。