Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意冠词的使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

例: I don't often go to the library because I find it too quiet and uncomfortable. I usually prefer studying in my dormitory where I feel more relaxed.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议先明确回答问题，再用连词连接具体细节，避免提及与图书馆不符的活动，如看电视。

例: I usually go to the library to study and complete my assignments. However, sometimes I feel tired because of the quiet environment, which makes me want to rest for a while.

提案: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达混乱，建议先直接回答问题，然后用简单句说明原因，避免重复。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child. I preferred watching cartoons and playing outside rather than studying.

提案: 回答中表达不连贯且有语法错误，建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并且避免重复表达。可以先给出总体看法，再用具体例子支持。

例: Chinese kids don't often go to the library because they prefer playing outdoor games like football or basketball. Reading books in the library might seem boring to them.

× Library is so quiet and not comfortable for me so I not only go not often go there, I usually study at my dormitory.

✓ The library is so quiet and not comfortable for me, so I not only do not often go there, I usually study at my dormitory.

名词前缺少冠词“the”，因为这里特指图书馆。

× It's more comfortable for me so I don't go library in my daily life.

✓ It's more comfortable for me, so I don't go to the library in my daily life.

“library”前缺少冠词“the”，并且缺少介词“to”。

× I go to the library to study and complete my assignments, but when I really in library I will choose to sleep or watch the TV programs because library is so quiet.

✓ I go to the library to study and complete my assignments, but when I am really in the library, I choose to sleep or watch TV programs because the library is so quiet.

缺少动词“am”，缺少冠词“the”，“will choose”改为一般现在时“choose”更符合习惯表达。

× I will feel so tired and I will fall asleep deep sleep.

✓ I will feel so tired and I will fall into a deep sleep.

“deep sleep”前缺少冠词“a”，并且表达更自然的是“fall into a deep sleep”。

× When I was a child, I paid her to watching some TV programs, cartoons.

✓ When I was a child, I used to watch some TV programs and cartoons.

“paid her to watching”结构错误，应该用“used to watch”表示过去习惯。

× I don't go to the library.

✓ I didn't go to the library.

描述过去的情况，应该用过去时态。

× I don't like to study when I was a child.

✓ I didn't like to study when I was a child.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时。

× I want to play, so I don't go to library when I was a child.

✓ I wanted to play, so I didn't go to the library when I was a child.

描述过去的情况，动词应使用过去时，且“library”前需加冠词“the”。

× To be honest, not often because children like to play outside rather than go to library, then paper to play some football or basketball or some teamwork games, then don't like to go to the library and read some book that's so boring for them.

✓ To be honest, not often because children like to play outside rather than go to the library, then prefer to play some football or basketball or some team games, and they don't like to go to the library and read books because that's so boring for them.

“library”前缺少冠词“the”，“paper”应为“prefer”，并且“some book”应为复数“books”。