Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy the peaceful environment and the beautiful view. It has many books that I like to read, and most people there are focused on their work or homework, which helps me concentrate.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

例: Usually, I read books in the library because it is quiet. Sometimes, I also do my homework there to meet deadlines. Additionally, having a cup of tea helps me concentrate better.

提案: Bạn cần tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và nói lắp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả sở thích của bạn khi còn nhỏ.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because I enjoyed reading books about space, such as the earth, moon, and stars. I have loved exploring new topics through books since then.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc về việc đến thư viện.

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because university exams are very difficult. The quiet atmosphere helps them focus on studying and preparing for their tests.

× I really quite like for the beautiful view

✓ I really quite like the beautiful view

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'like'. The verb 'like' is directly followed by the object without a preposition. Therefore, 'for' should be removed.

× it has a lot of books I can emerge in

✓ it has a lot of books I can immerse myself in

The verb 'emerge' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'immerse' which means to involve deeply. Also, 'immerse' requires a reflexive pronoun 'myself' and the preposition 'in' to complete the phrase.

× because many people so concentrate on doing work or doing a homework for the teachers aside them

✓ because many people concentrate so much on doing work or homework assigned by the teachers around them

The sentence structure is awkward and unclear. 'So' should be placed before 'much' to modify 'concentrate'. 'Doing a homework' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'For the teachers aside them' is unclear; it should be 'assigned by the teachers around them' to clarify meaning.

× I like to read book in the library

✓ I like to read books in the library

The noun 'book' is countable and should be pluralized to 'books' when referring to reading in general.

× I sometimes I can do the work or homework. My school is assigned for me and I do the deadline on the library

✓ Sometimes I can do the work or homework assigned by my school and I meet the deadlines in the library

The phrase 'My school is assigned for me' is incorrect; it should be 'homework assigned by my school'. 'Do the deadline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'meet the deadlines'. The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to location inside the library.

× I think a cup of water, a cup of tea is really need to concentrate on doing something

✓ I think a cup of water or a cup of tea is really needed to concentrate on doing something

The singular verb 'is' matches singular subject, but 'need' should be 'needed' to form correct passive meaning. Also, 'or' is better than a comma to connect alternatives.

× I think when I tried, I'd really like to reading books or, uh, explore the new things

✓ I think when I was a kid, I really liked reading books or exploring new things

The phrase 'when I tried' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a kid' or 'when I was young'. 'I'd really like to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'I really liked reading'. The verb forms should be consistent in past tense.

× I'd really like to reading books or, uh, explore the new things

✓ I really liked reading books or exploring new things

After 'like', the verb should be in '-ing' form when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'I'd really like to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'I really liked reading'.

× I really like to read book in the library since I was

✓ I have really liked reading books in the library since I was young

The phrase is incomplete and 'read book' should be 'reading books'. Also, 'since I was' needs a time reference like 'young' to complete the sentence.

× many people to enjoy to doing the exam

✓ many people enjoy doing the exam

The phrase 'to enjoy to doing' is incorrect. The verb 'enjoy' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'many people to enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'many people enjoy'.

× they very hard to go at the library

✓ they find it very hard to go to the library

The phrase 'very hard to go at the library' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' not 'at'. Also, 'they very hard' is incomplete; it should be 'they find it very hard'.

× the atmosphere of library is really quiet and important for study

✓ the atmosphere of the library is really quiet and important for studying

'Atmosphere of library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'important for study' should be 'important for studying' to use the gerund form after 'for'.