Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I don't go to the library often now. However, when I was at university, I sometimes went there to prepare for my final exams because it was very quiet and helped me concentrate.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构不够清晰，建议使用正确时态并简洁表达，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually went to the library to prepare for my final exams because it was a quiet place where I could focus on my studies, which helped me achieve good grades.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“a happy person”表达不太自然，建议用更贴切的词汇，并注意冠词使用。

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I didn't know its purpose. Instead, I spent a lot of time watching TV and rarely visited the library.

提案: 回答中使用了口语填充词“MMM”，建议避免使用，同时可以增加更多具体理由或例子，使回答更丰富。

例: I'm not sure, but I think Chinese kids don't often go to the library. For example, when I was a child, I did my homework at home and rarely visited the library.

× Actually I used to go to library because I want to prepare for my final exams and it's a great place to focus on my major and which helps me get high scores.

✓ Actually I used to go to the library because I wanted to prepare for my final exams and it's a great place to focus on my major which helps me get high scores.

这里缺少定冠词'the'，因为特指图书馆。'go to library'应改为'go to the library'。另外，时态应保持一致，前半句用过去时，故将'want'改为'wanted'。

× Actually I used to go to library because I want to prepare for my final exams and it's a great place to focus on my major and which helps me get high scores.

✓ Actually I used to go to the library because I wanted to prepare for my final exams and it's a great place to focus on my major which helps me get high scores.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态，'want'应改为'wanted'以保持时态一致。

× I was a happy person who spent a lot of time on watching TV, so I never went to library.

✓ I was a happy person who spent a lot of time watching TV, so I never went to the library.

'went to library'缺少定冠词'the'，应为'went to the library'。此外，'spent a lot of time on watching TV'中' on'多余，应直接用'verb + ing'形式，改为'spent a lot of time watching TV'。

× I was a happy person who spent a lot of time on watching TV, so I never went to library.

✓ I was a happy person who spent a lot of time watching TV, so I never went to the library.

'spend time'后面直接接动名词，不需要介词'on'，因此应去掉'on'。

× I just finished it at my home.

✓ I just finished it at home.

'at my home'中，'my'通常不与'home'连用，正确表达是'at home'。