Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够自然，语法和用词有误，表达不清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构来表达，比如说明你去图书馆的频率和原因。

例: I don't go to the library very often. Usually, I visit it only before important exams to review my notes.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议直接回答问题，说明你在图书馆通常做什么，并用连词连接句子。

例: I usually study or do my homework in the library because it is a quiet place. If I don't have any assignments, I prefer to stay at home.

提案: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地说明小时候是否去图书馆，并给出原因。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I preferred watching TV and playing with my friends after school.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（laboratory应为library）和重复。建议用正确词汇并简洁说明中国孩子去图书馆的情况。

例: Yes, libraries are very popular among Chinese students nowadays. Many of them book seats online to study or do their homework.

× I usually go to the library when there is before attacks, like some final exam I will review my crosses at the library.

✓ I usually go to the library when there are upcoming exams, like some final exams I will review my courses at the library.

句中使用了错误的表达“there is before attacks”，应使用“there are upcoming exams”来表达“有即将到来的考试”，因为“exams”是复数，需用“there are”。

× I usually go to the library when there is before attacks, like some final exam I will review my crosses at the library.

✓ I usually go to the library when there are upcoming exams, like some final exams I will review my courses at the library.

“final exam”应使用复数形式“final exams”，因为通常指多个考试。

× I usually go to the library when there is before attacks, like some final exam I will review my crosses at the library.

✓ I usually go to the library when there are upcoming exams, like some final exams I will review my courses at the library.

“review my crosses”中的“crosses”应为“courses”，且“review”后面直接接名词，无需介词。

× Well, if there is no tax, no exam after or no homework, I won't go to the library because I think library is a best place for me to learn and I want to other things that in the library.

✓ Well, if there is no test, no exam after, or no homework, I won't go to the library because I think the library is the best place for me to learn and I want to do other things in the library.

“there is no tax”应为“there is no test”，“library is a best place”应为“the library is the best place”，需要使用定冠词和最高级。

× Well, if there is no tax, no exam after or no homework, I won't go to the library because I think library is a best place for me to learn and I want to other things that in the library.

✓ Well, if there is no test, no exam after, or no homework, I won't go to the library because I think the library is the best place for me to learn and I want to do other things in the library.

“I want to other things that in the library”缺少动词，应为“I want to do other things in the library”，且“that”多余。

× No, when I was a kid, I must, I must focus on my television shows and I usually after school I usually play with my hung out with my friends and don't focus on the learning.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I had to focus on my television shows and usually after school I played or hung out with my friends and didn't focus on learning.

“must”用于过去时应改为“had to”，“play”与“hung out”时态应统一为过去时，“don't”应为“didn't”。

× No, when I was a kid, I must, I must focus on my television shows and I usually after school I usually play with my hung out with my friends and don't focus on the learning.

✓ No, when I was a kid, I had to focus on my television shows and usually after school I played or hung out with my friends and didn't focus on learning.

“play with my hung out with my friends”结构混乱，应分开为“played or hung out with my friends”。

× So I won't go to the library when I was a child.

✓ So I didn't go to the library when I was a child.

“won't”表示将来时，与过去时间状语“when I was a child”不符，应使用过去时“didn't”。

× Yes, in Chinese laboratory is very popular nowaday, especially for the students who want to who who want to review their exams or who want to do some homework.

✓ Yes, libraries in China are very popular nowadays, especially for students who want to review their exams or do some homework.

“laboratory”应为“libraries”，且“nowaday”拼写错误，应为“nowadays”。

× They will book certain library seats from online.

✓ They will book certain library seats online.

“book seats from online”中“from”用法错误，应直接用“online”作为副词。