Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and vary your vocabulary to sound more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I often visit the library to read storybooks. Additionally, I enjoy exploring various comedy books and fables there.

提案: Avoid filler words and be more specific about the type of scientific topics you are interested in. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I usually go to the library to read books and learn about different scientific topics, such as biology and physics.

提案: Avoid repeating phrases and use more formal language. Provide a reason and possibly a contrast to enrich your answer.

例: I didn't visit the library much as a child because I wasn't interested in reading at that time, but now I enjoy it a lot.

提案: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like "MO most". Use linking words and be more specific about the types of books children enjoy.

例: Yes, many Chinese children often visit the library because they enjoy reading various storybooks and scientific books.

× I often go to the library, uh, to read story books, and sometimes I also go to the library to read uh, uh, many kinds of comedy books and fables.

✓ I often go to the library, uh, to read storybooks, and sometimes I also go to the library to read uh, uh, many kinds of comedy books and fables.

The term 'story books' should be combined into one word 'storybooks' as it is a compound noun referring to books containing stories. This is a common usage in English and improves clarity.

× They love MO most story books and some other scientific books.

✓ They love most storybooks and some other scientific books.

The phrase 'MO most story books' seems to be a typo or mispronunciation. Correcting it to 'most storybooks' fixes the plural noun usage and removes the unclear term 'MO'. Also, 'story books' should be 'storybooks' as a compound noun.