Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takrorlanishlar mavjud. Ingliz tilida gapirganda, gaplarni aniq va to'g'ri tuzishga e'tibor bering. Masalan, "I haven't been to the library since I graduated from university" deb ayting. Shuningdek, fikrlaringizni qisqa va aniq ifodalashga harakat qiling.

例: No, I don't go to the library often because I haven't visited it since I graduated from university. However, I think the library is a very good and quiet place.

提案: Javobingizda ko'p to'xtashlar va noaniqliklar bor. Ingliz tilida gapirganda, fikrlaringizni aniq va ravon ifodalashga harakat qiling. Gaplaringizni qisqa va mantiqiy qilib tuzing, va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

例: In the library, I usually read books and prepare for my research projects. It helps me relax and focus better.

提案: Javobingizda takrorlanish va grammatik xatolar mavjud. Ingliz tilida gapirganda, gaplarni aniq va to'g'ri tuzishga e'tibor bering. Masalan, "I didn't go to the library as a child because I didn't know about it" deb ayting.

例: Actually, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't know about it. Although my school had a library, we were not allowed to enter it.

提案: Javobingizda ko'p to'xtashlar va mantiqsiz gaplar bor. Ingliz tilida gapirganda, fikrlaringizni aniq va ravon ifodalashga harakat qiling. Gaplaringizni qisqa va mantiqiy qilib tuzing, va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are hardworking and keen on studying, which helps them succeed academically.

× But I prefer library is a very good place and quiet place.

✓ But I prefer the library because it is a very good and quiet place.

The original sentence lacks the correct use of 'there is' or a linking verb to connect the subject and predicate. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify it. The corrected sentence uses 'because it is' to properly link the ideas and includes the definite article.

× I usually do in the library, uh, reading, uh, books, uh, or, umm, uh, preparing for, uh, my research projects, uh, and uh, it gives me a relaxed time, uh, or I can.

✓ I usually read books or prepare for my research projects in the library, and it gives me a relaxing time.

The original sentence has an incorrect sentence structure with unnecessary fillers and incomplete phrases. The correction removes fillers, rearranges the sentence for clarity, and uses 'relaxing' as the correct adjective form.

× But in my school we had the one but we didn't enter this library.

✓ But in my school, we had one, but we didn't enter the library.

The phrase 'the one' is incorrect here; 'one' without 'the' is appropriate. Also, 'this library' should be 'the library' to refer to a specific library known to both speaker and listener.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids enjoy going to the library, uh, because, uh, they are very hardworking and uh. Scientists, uh, they are very keen on studying and that's why I think, uh.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids enjoy going to the library because they are very hardworking. Scientists are very keen on studying, and that's why I think so.

The original sentence has pronoun confusion and incomplete sentences. The correction clarifies the pronouns and separates ideas into complete sentences for better understanding.