Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "go to library frequently" and improve grammar by adding articles, e.g., "go to the library frequently." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Although there isn't a library near my home, I often go to the library because it's a quiet place where I can concentrate on my assignments without distractions.

提案: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, correct phrases like "go to library as a leisure" to "go to the library for leisure."

例: I usually go to the library for leisure during my free time because it helps me escape my busy schedule. Moreover, it's a quiet place where I can fully focus on my assignments.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding linking words and correcting article usage. For example, say "went to the library" instead of "went to library." Also, try to make the sentence flow better by connecting ideas.

例: When I was a kid, I often went to the library to read magazines because the photos really appealed to me. Besides that, I loved reading books there.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use articles like "well-equipped libraries" and correct "prefer to digital appliances" to "prefer digital devices." Also, try to provide more specific supporting details and use linking words for coherence.

例: China has many well-equipped libraries that are convenient to use. However, I believe that many Chinese kids prefer using digital devices for reading and studying nowadays.

× Even though there isn't a library located near my place, I go to library frequently to concentrate.

✓ Even though there isn't a library located near my place, I go to the library frequently to concentrate.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. So, it should be 'go to the library'. This is a common 'There be issue' related to article usage with places.

× It's a good place without distraction to do my assignments.

✓ It's a good place without distractions to do my assignments.

The word 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' because it refers to multiple possible interruptions. Also, 'without distractions' is the correct prepositional phrase. This is an issue of incorrect use of quantifiers and prepositions combined, but mainly preposition usage here.

× I go to library as a leisure in my free time.

✓ I go to the library for leisure in my free time.

Again, 'go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'as a leisure' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for leisure' to express the purpose of going. This is a 'There be issue' and preposition usage problem.

× I need focus to do my my assignments and it's a quiet place to concentrate fully.

✓ I need to focus to do my assignments and it's a quiet place to concentrate fully.

The verb 'need' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to focus' rather than the noun 'focus'. Also, 'my my' is a repetition error. This is a verb form issue and minor typo, but mainly related to verb usage.

× When I was just a kid, I went to library to read magazines and the photos of magazines really appealed to me and I loved to read books.

✓ When I was just a kid, I went to the library to read magazines and the photos in the magazines really appealed to me and I loved to read books.

'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'photos of magazines' is better expressed as 'photos in the magazines' to indicate the photos contained within the magazines. This is a 'There be issue' and preposition usage problem.

× China has well equipped libraries where Chinese people can use them conveniently.

✓ China has well-equipped libraries where Chinese people can use them conveniently.

The phrase 'well equipped' should be hyphenated as 'well-equipped' when used as an adjective before a noun. This is an issue of incorrect use of adjectives.

× Nevertheless, I believe Chinese people prefer to digital appliances.

✓ Nevertheless, I believe Chinese people prefer digital appliances.

The verb 'prefer' is directly followed by the object without the preposition 'to' when comparing general preferences. The phrase 'prefer to digital appliances' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer digital appliances'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.